Negative Space Ch. 10

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"Hey there."

"Hey yourself, doc," his smooth voice responded. He turned to face me. "I'm feeling much better. And before you start in on the crying and apologizing, I have to tell you that I understand. And it's fine. And I'm glad to be back at work."

I looked at him closely, and felt out that golden thread that linked the two of us. He felt—he felt good. Cheery. Satisfied. I smiled up into his eyes.

"I'm so glad Elliott. I missed you. And thank you so much for taking care of Nora for me." I threw my arms around his neck and hugged him closely. He smelled clean and I giggled.

"What?"

"Gosh, I bet I smell awful. I've been a mess this whole week, and I think I'm still wearing the same clothes, even."

"Oh, you smell okay. A little dirty, but the thing you don't realize is that you smell incredibly good. All humans smell delicious, sure, but YOU smell amazing." Elliott said, smiling. "Honest," he added, when it was clear I didn't believe him.

"Uh huh, sure. Now why don't you tell me what you're so satisfied with yourself, buster."

"Well, I have to admit that I hung out here a lot while you were busy sleeping over at Sandra's. While I was resting before that, I heard from a friend of mine that his partner has come down with what turned out to be, I think, the same sickness as Helena, that vampire you saw last week before the clinic opened. So I did some more research, studying the samples we took. And I think I have a good idea of where to start!"

"Whoa, really? Oh my goodness, Elliott, you're the best!" I was ecstatic. I'd been so busy with everything else I'd almost forgotten Helena, the desperately sick vampire, but I hadn't forgotten her entirely. Only at lull moments when I was totally unable to do anything else would I remember all the work I had yet to do to try to save her, and my stomach would sink in guilt. But this, this was amazing! I decided to close the clinic early tonight to get in some extra work. Elliott decided to leave to go do a little recon in order to find out whether any other vampires were suffering the same symptoms. He promised to be back by 4 am, when the two of us would sit down to make a game plan. I was excited.

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katgoddess1katgoddess1over 12 years ago
I love this story!

Lana has certainly started to make her mark as a physician to the supernatural world. Why does she smell so appealing to vampires and what is this strange ability she has? Could that make her sexually vulnerable to vampires?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
frustrated

I really liked this story in the beginning but I've kind of hated the last 3 chapters. I wish her and Theo could have worked or talked things out. I don't like that she is just horny for vampires in general. I do like the addition of the weres though. I'm interested to see where u take this story, but i'm hoping to see more direction soon.

MizTMizTover 12 years ago
Lana

is the type of human we should all be. She treats everyone w/respect regardless of who they are. What a world it could be!

I don't know where to start, you have so much going on. I usually feel the story going in a certain direction, but this chapter has me stumped because so much is going on. oh well here goes anyway. Will Lana give Prometheus a chance? Will he try and force her to stop treating the Were's? Will Elliot's research be successful? Will Lana continue to feel uncomfortable in the human world? What's up w/her and Knox? See so many different directions.

I find myself really excited about the next chapter and where you take the story next, so get to work!!!!!!!! demanding aren't I

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
Delightful!

I'm enjoying each chapter more than the last. I particularly like the addition of the weres.

Great fun and very well done.

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