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Click here"Don't be a stranger." She called out.
He thought about going back, but decided it was best to walk away without a word, like the heroes and studs in the movies. She would be calling on him again soon, of that he was sure.
- COMMENTS
fireguy365almost 13 years agoLiked you story, even if the part leading up to the reason we all read it, was somewhat contrived; can't imagine a women not knowing when her robe was opened up the back. Anyway, taking it for what it's worth it got to the part where they have sex, which was good. My problem is with the use of "nickers" instead of "panties". I know it's what the English call them but it just doesn't have the same effect on my willy, if you know what I mean. That being said, for a wham - bam get it on short story, it was good.
asiaprofover 17 years agoPlausible scenario,
Steady increase in pace,
Nice sentence construction,
Good attention to detail,
Together make wonderful reading.
don87654over 17 years agoBut could have been much better. A houswife next door that is horny for a teenaged neighbor would probably also make a good candidate to become a new Mommy, for this teenager virgin boy.
Anonymousover 17 years agoI liked the way you paced the story, and also making it very hot. I rated it at 75% only because it has to be continued. The potential of the story - and yours - promise very good sequels. Go on, mate !
