- Lesbian Sex
- Never Too Old
- Page 5
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"Me, too. I can feel the waves of sexual energy rising to my hard clit. Oh, yes, yes.
I'm cumming. I'm cumming with you, Marina."
Penny moved her head over Marina's vaginal opening and urethra, and Marina forced her head down onto her pussy so that it was like a suction cup over her vulva. Marina lifted her face upward as Penny raised her hips off the pillows so the two made contact with the other.
Without another word between them, Penny and Marina let go their ejaculate loads into the mouth of the other, filling each other's mouth with the clear liquid that had built up in both their spongy area of their G-Spots.
Each squirted again, so much so that it ran out between the sides of their lips and over their faces. When Lady Rose saw the quantity of ejaculate Penny and Marina were shooting, in shear wantonness she came off her sofa lounge as quickly as possible and knelt down at Penny's head and got as much of Marina's ejaculate as possible.
In deference to Lady Rose, Marina lifted her pussy off Penny's mouth and stood up so Lady Rose could put her mouth over her still ejaculating pussy to catch the last mouthfuls of clear liquid. Lady Rose reached around Marina's ass cheeks and took them into her small hands, pulling her forward as she put her mouth over Marina's vaginal opening.
"Oh, my, this tastes too wonderful, both Marina's pussy against my face and her ejaculate in my mouth," Lady Rose sighed within herself.
Even after Marina stopped shooting, Lady Rose didn't want to let her go but continued to eat her pussy, arousing still hidden sexual desire within her and the need for a second orgasm. So, Marina reached down and gently pulled Lady Rose's head into her pussy and started face fucking her, and to her surprise her throbbing clit responded to Lady Rose's lingual attention, and she felt the oncoming of another climax.
Increasing the rhythm of her face fucking and Lady Rose's lapping away at her over-sensitive clit, the second wave of erotic impulses shot through her genitals, and she exploded in rhythmic, sensual impulses.
"Oh, Lady Rose, you're going to make me cum again. Oh, yes, I'm cumming, and now I'm going to cum into your mouth.
"Oh, yes. Oh, yes, Marina. Please do. Cum into my mouth so I may taste your feminine elixir of wanton bliss," Lady Rose implored Marina with her mind.
No sooner had Lady Rose thought this than Marina grunted deeply from within herself that went to the very core of her pussy, and with trembling legs she came.
"Yes. Yes, now. Lady Rose. As you want. I'm cumming…cumming," cried out Marina so loudly that all the women in the great room stopped what they were doing with one another and looked toward the back where they saw Lady Rose on her knees eating Marina's young pussy.
With not as much force or quantity, Marina ejaculated once more, only this time directly into Lady Rose's open and willing mouth. Lady Rose mumbled uncontrollable noises through her nose as she drank down Marina's ejaculate. In her mind she had made it to her long-awaited Nirvana, the watching of two sisters making incestuous love and eating a young woman at her age of 70, thus proving to herself one is Never Too Old when it comes to love, sex, and romance.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoThis comment is highly critical but is intended to be constructive criticism. I gave up on this story after a couple of pages because most of your dialogue was so stilted and completely unnatural that it rendered the story unreadable. A good example is on this page: "Cum into my mouth so that I may taste your feminine elixir of wanton bliss." Who the hell speaks like that, even in a story (and especially in the throes of sexual ecstasy)? I very much doubt that even Victorian pornography writers would have come up with something like that. If you had submitted this for a magazine or anthology, it would have been rejected so fast the envelope would have caught fire. And it's most unlikely that the editor would ever want to look at your work again. In real life, people just would not speak this way. In a good story the dialogue should sound completely natural. When you write dialogue, read it out aloud to yourself---if it doesn't sound natural and right, then keep rewriting until it does.
Anonymousover 10 years agoI am a man, but as I read this I began wishing that I was a woman who could give and receive this type of sexual pleasure described.
I shall think of this often and I thank the author for the fine wriiting and suspense of the story/
Anonymousover 10 years agowomen are NEVER too old for sex unless there are circumstances. A woman who has taken care of her body and mind is an incredible lover in her 50's, 60's, and you mentioned 70. Most have yearned to remember the days having sex and become almost possessive
BRAVO to you
Anonymousover 11 years agoI wonder if you are still around but that is by the by...
Please understand that this is purely constructive criticism but have you read this story? I am afraid I gave up about halfway down the first page - you appeared to be making all plot advances via your characters conversations. And what they said was so unbelieveable! What do you say to your partner just before orgasm? Maybe you gasp or pant or maybe you scream but you don't tell her you are cumming and use words like elixir! I asked my girlfriend what I did but just said I dribble and moan!
Read it through and ask yourslf if what each character is saying sounds believeable; would you say that to someone in the same circumstance? That is what I tell my third grade pupils when they write conversations.
Please don't take this as anything harsh since we need more lesbian erotica written by women for women and we can only learn from each other!
I shall put some of my stories up shortly, based on my own experiences (in the exhibitionist/lesbian/fetish areas, and maybe my true life incest tale if I can stomach putting something so intimate up to view) and you may review them, but that will have to wait for a spare afternoon.
Lexie
