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"What?"
"Yes, It arrived and I tried it on. I altered it a smidge and I thought it looked good on me so I went with it."
"It is absolutely adorable. I have a feeling everything looks good on you."
- COMMENTS
Anonymous29 days agoThis was ok but faded with the ending as it bring in Loretta for the batsh$t crazy final chapter which was an absolute dud.
Anonymous3 months agoA tenth Dan losing control? Um.....NO. Just HELL NO. He would lose his dan and get busted down to 2nd or third dan for that. NO higher dan "LOSES" control.
If Sandy had an IQ of 160+, she would not be able to be hypnotized. Hypnosis isn't specific. If someone was specific, the spouse would EASILY see the difference, especially if the person who was hypnotized was "Activated". Have I mentioned that hypnotizing someone is ILLEGAL without CONSENT? Bad, bad results come from that.
HUGE PLOT HOLES. Sloppy writing. Hopefully, there isn't more of this in the future.
Anonymous4 months agoA romantic fantasy? When rivals meet parry and parle? The games people play? Is that sophisticated or decadent? Are the highly affluent amused by teasing and flirting as social amusement?
miket04229 months agoAll of the sudden Sandy is a genius and Frank had her hypnotized since they were dating? Neither of those things make sense or fit within the framework of the storyline that was established within the first chapter.
Based on her being so smart & sneaky, as described by their daughters I get the feeling she engineered the confrontation with Frank as her means of proving her loyalty to Bill.
This could have been a good continuation of the story if not for the sudden insertion of her genius level IQ and long term hypnosis. Plus her being overly clingy and insecure really detracted from the story for me.
