No, Baby. Don't Cum Yet

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I tell you what to do for a change.
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I tell you what to do for a change.


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Sailor92694Sailor92694over 1 year ago

Nice, but through most of the story I didn’t believe the voice. She was just reading text. Also, don’t switch between describing the scene and being in the scene. Nice early effort- keep developing!

Wonderman1Wonderman1over 7 years ago
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Love your voice and your story, very stimulating. Thanks for posting.

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