"Good morning, baby. Looks like both of us overindulged last night."
"That's one way of putting it," she replied sarcastically.
He brought her a cup of coffee, kissed her on the forehead and returned to making their breakfast. Both felt guilty about the previous night's events, but neither of them ever mentioned it.
The next few days saw them lying around and relaxing, each absorbed in their own thoughts. While sex was a non-issue at first, they fell asleep each night in each others arms. For now, contentment was a good thing.
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Mistakes!
You made a few mistakes in this story - both grammatical and your choice of the category that you placed the story. However, the story was interesting and deserving of the 4* rating that I gave it. You show promise as an author, so please keep writing. By the way, I mostly read LW stories and this would have been a great story if she had let the boys fuck her with out the restraints.more...
Great story
Well written Loving Wife story. One of the best on here. Looking forward to more.
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For most of the negative comments I can only say, "Get a grip people! It's a story!"
I have been a reader of Literotica for many years now. There's a story (many) that appeal to readers of all persuasions. For any of you to condemn them for their tastes defies the very principle of this publication. In so many ways you reflect the intolerance of people that would chastise all of you for even pulling this site up. That said, going from 1st to 3rd person is a huge blunder that I should have picked up myself. I'm unable to rectify the matter now but will endeavor to avoid it in the future and proofread more thoroughly. For the one who wondered how she walked naked back to the hotel, it was a cottage on a private beach. To those of you who critiqued this story, good and bad, I thank you. My next submission has just been submitted and I invite all of your views. Enjoy your Literotica, a truly unique publication.more...
A thank you to @buderica as a real writer...
A thank you to @buderica because he is how a real writer should be: He writes what he likes, and accepts the good and bad critics from the readers!! I say critics, not uncalled-for insults!! Just critics about the stories and characters! Not like so many other writers, like recently @Robsound and @a_random_user, that delete the bad critics trying to show how their stories only get good comments!!!more...
Don't bogart that joint my friend :>)
And toss all the sour grapes in the garbage where they belong. Five stars for a hot story. There's a loving wife and extra-marital fun so it's fine in this category.
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