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M A R K : : : Holly mounted my face, and I toggled my tongue into beast mode and slurped the length of her slit, ending each stroke with a nibble of her clit. Her pussy began quivering almost immediately, signaling she had reached a zone of soft, continuous cumming.
I cupped her breasts, and held one of them while I located one of Shannon's -- not as easy as it sounds with your face covered in pussy. It was almost more than I could keep up with -- thrusting up into Shannon, tonguing Holly, and entertaining a different girl's boob in each hand. In no time I found myself launching my cum up into Shannon.
H O L L Y : : : His breathing got faster as he came, and he vibrated his tongue directly on my clit. That escalated the long, gentle orgasm I had been enjoying into a fierce, intense one. My entire body tensed, and I felt my mouth flexing, forming silent, unrecognizable words. I rode his face as long as I could and collapsed, slumping over to the side.
Mark's orgasm triggered Shannon's. She rode him relentlessly as I fell off his face. I reached for Jason, who slid into bed beside me. Shannon collapsed onto Mark's chest and they rolled onto their sides. Both of them fell asleep quite quickly.
As Jason and I drifted off, I thought of his earlier question, "Did you see that?" Of course I saw it. Mark and Shannon are falling for each other. I wonder if they realize it yet...
I snuggled a little closer to Jason, who breathed like he had already reached the deep sleep of the innocent and pure. I allowed a tiny thought to bloom, before I shoved it away -- they may not be the only ones.
( to be continued )
- COMMENTS
gravyrugalmost 8 years agothis POV-switching you do, but it works for the story. I do wish the switches weren't quite so quick, that we had more time with one before the switch, but that's a personal preference.
Piretteover 8 years agoI understand that this is your writing style, and I fully support your decision, and right, to use any style you feel gets your ideas out to the public.
That being said, your style difficult for *me* to follow, and takes my head out of the story and out of 'the sexy place'.
See, I ain't hatin', it just isn't for me. Keep up the good work!
~P
Anonymousover 8 years agoTex, ignore the haters, I loved the writing style. It helped me enjoy the story knowing what each character thought at all times. Can't wait for the next chapter.
