Not As Naive As You Think Ch. 03

byMissWolfy©

"Okay, we should probably go to the living room so we don't disturb Sena though," Kiara suggested while turning towards the door.

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I hope the point of view changes wasn't too confusing. I really like first person for the main character because it really puts you in the eyes of the character but I also enjoy third person because it's great for giving you a feel of multiple characters. Sorry if it was too confusing I promise to get better. But anyways, I hope you enjoyed the chapter.

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