"Okay, we should probably go to the living room so we don't disturb Sena though," Kiara suggested while turning towards the door.
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I hope the point of view changes wasn't too confusing. I really like first person for the main character because it really puts you in the eyes of the character but I also enjoy third person because it's great for giving you a feel of multiple characters. Sorry if it was too confusing I promise to get better. But anyways, I hope you enjoyed the chapter.
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all i can is WOW plz keep up gr8 work n dnt keep us w8ng. Cant w8 2 c whats'p next n keep em coming ur born 4 ths
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