It was all I needed. With her hard nipple setting off lightning bolts on my tongue, my thighs clamped together over her hand -- and of course her thighs closed on mine, too -- and I came with a sweet, long, shuddering orgasm; my entire body twitching uncontrollably with Susan's nipple still between my lips, powering the continual, flowing climax that seemed like it would never end.
At that point -- predictably -- I woke up with my hand down my soaking wet panties and realised with a guilty shudder that I had just come in my sleep with Nick asleep beside me. I don't even know if she came.
~~~
Oh boy. I did NOT expect that. I wrote this out to maybe get it out of my system, but I didn't expect ... this ... euphoria! It's not out, it's in! More in than it ever was! I feel full to bursting. With what though? Lust? Anticipation? Excitement? I'm so confused.
I just re-read the dream and it's not quite right -- it's hazier in my mind; jumpier, with incomplete thoughts and images and confused feelings. But it's powerful; oh my God, it's powerful! It hardly seems like I wrote it; it reads like some racy bodice ripper. No, check that: it reads like fucking porn! I'm ashamed to admit (am I though?) that I was masturbating reading it; and my orgasm was every bit as powerful as the first time, the one I dreamed. God, I want to read it again.
I need to get ready to go out now. I can't wait to see her ... but I still don't know what I'm going to say. Or do. I'd give anything to know what she was thinking.
~~~ THE END ~~~
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Nice contrast
I liked the darker introspective interludes with the lighter humor in other places. I found the writing to be superb as usual. This is different from your other stories, more personal with the character. Very well done.more...
@ilovedirtyjokes - yep you're that guy - the presumptive one.
She was doing shoulder shrugs, thus was working out the "traps". Vigorously, too; so the shoulders are going up and down a lot.
I get it, maybe you don't have boobs (never can tell with "that guy" people y'know) but there's lots of things that can get them bouncing - including rapidly shrugging ;)more...
I hate to be "that person" but as an anatomy nerd, the muscle behind the breast is the pectoralis, the "traps" is the trapezius on the upper back - its not gonna make the boobs bounce. Otherwise I can't wait to read more! Like I said, bit of an anatomy nerd, and again, sorry to be the Debby Downer....more...
Fabulous!!!!!!!
Hello Belinda,
Thank you so much for posting this little story,it is such a beautifully written and deliciously horny tale!Please continue with it???
Love your work,
Lindsay.
Work at it
You say in your afterword that you're unsure if you are the person to tell the rest of the tale. Of course you are. This is an excellent story and it's a pity that it had to come to such an abrupt end: you've started it and somewhere along the line your Muse will show the way to continue. I think there is a hell of a lot more story to be told. You have described Anna's internal conflict very well and it's certainly a pleasure to find a new (to me) writer on this site who can actually write. (I loved the line about '...a kinky topless rendition of Swan Lake...) So keep thinking about it, Belinda, and as we say in the UK, give it some welly!
Brianmore...
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