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Click hereYou had such a beautiful hard cock, we had to do something about it.
We couldn't just leave you on your own with it.
So was that my birthday present?
Oh no...
... that was just the beginning.
Now all three of us are going into the bathroom...
... and we're going to have a shower together.
Then we'll come back here...
... and you can watch us suck each other's pussies until we come.
Then you can fuck us.
If you want to.
Would you like that, daddy?
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoOne of the worst things I've read on this site. What on earth possessed you to choose that format
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoMostly because punctuation is really important. It's an impossible narrative to follow. Try using different font styles for different characters.
Anonymousover 10 years agothere are times when I (be honest, so do you) just want to read about the event, not the thoughts behind it...sort of like being in the room, listening, observing.
thank you for the change.
slutprincess4daddyalmost 11 years agoI love the idea - it was a little hard to imagine two girls talking (I read it as though they alternated every other sentence but sometimes got too distracted in trying to read instead of just trying to enjoy), but I really liked the concept, and I definitely got wet imagining two daughters touching Daddy's cock and learning that they play with each other.... Can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoGreat way to tell a story! I can just imagine his two daughters being so naughty. Hope you continue this story with future chapters.
