"Sure thing, Mom."
His parents made the turn and walked away from his room. His secret was safe. For now.
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certainly one of the best
Blend of sexy and loving...Wish I had a sister like that
Loved it
This is how things should be, free and open. Too much is kept hidden. Looking forward to the next part.
Fun
An enjoyable and frisky follow up.
Loved the "dad" jokes as my kids call them.
Looking forward to more and second the group sex idea.
from the author
Thanks for reading the story and leaving comments.As you can see from this chapter, i am open to suggestions. I'll be glad to add another chapter and use some of the suggestions.
It may take a while. i made a goal to have stories for every contest in 2016. For Valentine's Day I did "Father, Will you Sculpt me?". "Nude Surprise" was for April Fools. I'll be posting "The Sleepwalking Detective" as my Nude Day offering. I have a rough drafts for Summer Love'n, Halloween and Winter. In between working on contest stories, i'll put another adventure together for this crew.
Tell me what you want!
regularguy13more...
Well written and a good read
Given the story brief for this chapter, I was worried that it would be some sort of clumsy and unrealistic event but it was really well thought out and written.
There are a number of potential story threads that could be picked up and expanded :-
- Brigid & Luke
- Nick & Lisa
- Brigid & Fiona's parents
- Frank & Giselle
- Sam & Sarah mixing with Roger & Ruth
- etc.
I would like to see some of that and would read future chapters with interest.more...
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