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Click hereSeems that a neighbour of Red’s was too nosy for their own good. They just had to ruin everything. We were just getting back together and fixing all our problems with Red’s sweet torturous apology for running out and giving up on us. But Fate is a cruel bitch and She just couldn’t let us live in harmony – it just had to be ruined by that awful cacophony of sirens.
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“That’s my step one completed. I think that’s all the details. Did I forget anything?”
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoI'm shocked at how, strangely, I understand the main character - though I can't say I would approach it the same way (the issue of wanting Red). I am amazed at how real you make that person, and how much I sympathize with him by the end. Keep writing!
YourLittleAngelleabout 16 years agoOne of the most fun and thrilling stories I've read in quite a while. I'm frightened with myself for liking it as much as I do. A truly enjoyable and entertaining read!
