Of Heaven and Hell, My Side Ch. 03

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"Tell you what why don't I stop over tonight, there's someone I want you to meet. For Dinner?" He looked at me and I nodded. "Sounds good Mom, Mandy will be coming and why don't you have Mark, Georgie and the kids over. Yea, I want you all to meet someone and that's all I'm gonna say. See you tonight, around five. Here's Mandy." He handed the phone to Mandy.

She put the phone to her ear and said, "Hi Mom...Mom...Mom...Mom she yelled, listen to me. I guess that you will have to wait until tonight to meet her...yes it's a her...I don't know...Mom you will have to wait until tonight. Yes, Joe and I will be there. Bye now."

She closed the phone and handed it back to Zack. "Oh God You owe me...you owe me big time. You are never going to be able to pay this back."

We sat and talked for a while, then Mandy said that she had better get going and then laughed, "See you two tonight. Oh God this is going to be great."

She was laughing as she left the apartment. Zack said, "Mandy you are pure evil, how did such a nice guy like me have such an evil twin. You are the evil twin."

Mandy once again gave that mad scientist laugh as she walked to the elevator.

I turned to Zack and said, "She's right you know, tonight will be interesting." I ran to him and put my arms around his neck and kissed him. "Zack, I'm afraid. What will your parents think about me? I was a nun and I got involved with a former student. Really involved, I got pregnant by him." I started to cry.

He held me and kissed my cheek. "I will be with you. They will love you, not as much as I do, but they will love you. Especially when they find out that you are carrying their grandchild."

Thanks for reading, please comment if you want. I want to know what you think about my writing. If you leave an e-mail address I will respond.

Once again, in you are a member of the Benedictine Order, let me know what I got wrong and if I write another story about the Benedictines I will try to get it right.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Please, someone continue this series. Carol is going to be a mommy, unofficially she's a wife, and truly loves her student/husband!

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

Where as this was an excellent story, the ending was incomplete as it did not contain the dinner at his parents house, the wedding and the children as was shown in part 2 of the original story. I had hoped that this time around with her telling her side of the story it would be complete, yet it was not. Seeing how long it has been since this was published and that there has been no activity from this author since 11/20/14, I suspect that either something has happened to this gifted author or the anons with their nasty comments have driven him off. At any rate this was a wonderful tale and I will give a well deserved 5+++ stars. (Note: If the author is still reading the comments, a 4th chapter and conclusion to this wonderful love story would be wonderful and appreciate by your readers)

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

Where as this was an excellent story, the ending was incomplete as it did not contain the dinner at his parents house, the wedding and the children as was shown in part 2 of the original story. I had hoped that this time around with her telling her side of the story it would be complete, yet it was not. Seeing how long it has been since this was published and that there has been no activity from this author since 11/20/14, I suspect that either something has happened to this gifted author or the anons with their nasty comments have driven him off. At any rate this was a wonderful tale and I will give a well deserved 5+++ stars. (Note: If the author is still reading the comments, a 4th chapter and conclusion to this wonderful love story would be wonderful and appreciate by your readers)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Next chapter please

I know how the story ends but I really want more! I wanna read the introduction to the family, the wedding, and even the birth of the first child. I became so invested in this story and NEED more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Another chapter

I really enjoyed this story, but please could you add the final chapter, please.

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