Offspring Ch. 038

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"Exactly. We will make it look like a raid by space pirates. They won't like it, but they won't feel threatened. Pirates are opportunists, they raid a place, steal what they can carry and piss off again. Only after we have control of their weapons will we tell them they have been usurped and who their masters are."

By that time the townspeople were arriving. The place was getting crowded. We went on to other things.

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coloradojcoloradojalmost 11 years ago
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Please continue this story. It is a great read and I hate to think it will be left open-ended like it is.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

This is yet another story where it's really good, yet not finished. At least you've got a decent chunk of your story (or at least something that looks like a sizable chunk) though it's still not finished, which is terribly saddening.

I kept wondering if Frank'd go back in time and tell Lata to have her death faked, then "time as he knows it" wouldn't be changed. Theoretically he could find whatever illness she had and have it cured, and/or have the whole thing faked and he just didn't know it then (but would "now").

I'm curious though to find out if his "constant travel body" means he can move around space instantaneously, if it's just 20 minutes after he left once he returns, and if he can just "shapeshift" at any time. (Also would be interesting to hear what bloodwork would show up with, and other scans, and what his 'physical body' takes to 'kill', since he's 'some kind of astral being' or something.)

What sucks most though is knowing I'll probably never get to find out, since you seem to have disappeared...

hitchcorhitchcorabout 11 years ago

Offspring1-38

I have to admit I don't read them but convert it to an audio book (for personal use only). Please them me the story is not over... keep them coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Can't wait for your next installment

Great stuff, and I can't wait ! All the best!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
stretaa

WOW I love this story, I just couldn't "put it down". thanks for such a well thought out story.

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