- Romance
- Old Man Eli
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"Sure how can I help?"
"Tell me about Eli. I mean really tell me the details."
"Sure okay, hold on a second." I covered the mouthpiece and told Kelli what was going on and she broke out in a large grin.
"Sara why do you ask?"
"I'm just curious. I have been seeing Charlie and well...then I met this guy. Well based on what you told me before about amazing things happening and somebody suddenly coming into my life...I'm sure I've met Old Man Eli.
The End.
- COMMENTS
Ravey195 months agoCertainly unusual but rntertaining and generally well thought out. The beginning was confusing and the ending unexpected. Overall, a great story.
huntsman29over 2 years agoSad to say it lost me in the beginning. Too much conversation without narrative giving life to the people that were speaking. Sorry.
rightbankover 6 years agoWhy didn't anyone make a phone call to ask about the empty, dusty, house to locate and learn about Eli?
mjef2about 7 years agoGripping. Unusual. So much more depth to the story and quality that I fondly found myself reading this again, and enjoying it as much as the first time.
Thank you for taking me with you on this journey (again), and look forward to meeting again.
There are some gems to be found here.
