Old World Magic Ch. 13

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So I did something that might be a little unethical; I used my powers on her. *Mike is completely disease free. Mike is completely safe to fuck without a condom. In fact, you're going to enjoy it so much more without a condom. Tell him.... tell him to fuck you hard and deep. Tell him you want to feel him inside you, that you want to feel his hot cum shooting up into you.* I pushed this idea, this concept, into Erin's mind. It wasn't hard, in fact, it was one of the easiest commands I'd ever given. It was something she'd already felt, she just needed a little push.

She moaned and finally cried out, "Enough teasing Mike! Please, would you please fuck me? I want to feel that hard dick in me... I want to...." She paused for a moment as the last bit of her self control warred with her sexual urges. I was about to push mentally one last time, but I didn't need too as she finished her thought, "I want to feel your hot cum spurting inside me!"

Well, how could I resist? I gripped the base of my shaft and lined my thick cock head up to her slick cunny. I rubbed the head up and down her wet pussy, sliding it between her puffy wet lips. Her forehead fell against the glass shower wall and she moaned. Then she pushed back slightly, the head of my cock beginning to spear her open.

I groaned in bliss as the swollen head of my fat cock slid into her wetness. It was odd I supposed, it had only been a day and a half ago since Erin had knelt on this very shower floor, sucking my cock. Yet my memory said that it had been weeks since I'd seen her last, weeks since that night we fucked in the hotel room just outside the bathroom door. Even thinking of my time in that other place as nothing but a dream, it was still odd.

"Nnng, god yes that's so good," I muttered as my shaft sank fully into her, my balls meeting her gripping lips.

She moaned and put a bit of sway into her back, causing the falling drops of water to change their path as they ran down her body, "Yes Mike, yes, give it to me now, don't hold back."

I was happy to oblige. My hands found her hips and gripped them as I began to set a firm, driving pace, bucking my hips into her, slamming my cock all the way into her as I did so. I needed this. I realized that as the water from the shower sprayed across the two of us and we coupled wordlessly. I needed this from her. While it may have only been less than two days since I'd last fucked Erin, it felt like so much more. It wasn't the finality of the act either. It was the act itself. I wasn't just looking forwards to cumming, to emptying my load inside of her, it was this whole act. It made me feel right again when I hadn't even realized that I'd felt wrong.

With each and every thrust into her quivering box, it felt like a weight had been lifted from my shoulders. That the 'wrongness' that had been hovering around me, laying on my soul, since I gave Erin's father that deadly command began to dissipate. I hadn't even known how much that had been tasking me until it began to remove itself. It made the act of fucking Erin an almost spiritual experience, almost holy.

My contact with her mind hadn't fully been severed even though I'd closed the 'mental door' in my mind. I was still getting echos of her thoughts, likely due to our close and intimate contact. So when I 'heard' her repetitive cries mentally, I listened in. It was voyeuristic, certainly, but I didn't care.

'Holy fuck, holy fuck, oh god, oh god,' she repeated in a nonstop litany inside her own head, 'I'm going to cum, I'm going to cum, I can't believe how fucking good this feels, holy fuck, I'm going to cum so hard, oh my god I'm so close, so close, so close....'

The pure erotic sensation of her thoughts made me so turned on, I felt like I could cum at that moment. My instinct was to hold back, to make her cum first, but then I realized I was above that. First of all, she was a paid professional, why should I care if she got off? I did care of course, but did I need too? Secondly, if she was this close, maybe my orgasm would trigger hers. Sometimes it was all women needed to crest the peak. Finally... why was I relying on my physical prowess alone? I was a mage was I not?

So I fucked her harder, and harder, letting my thick shaft plunge into her violently as I drove myself to my own peak, and then I pushed a thought into her head. *When Mike cums inside you, it will trigger one of the strongest and best orgasms you've ever had*

I felt the magical suggestion settle into her deep unconscious mind just as I reached my own peak. She was gasping and moaning now, her hands pressed against the thick glass of the shower. I tensed and pulled her hips back against me hard as I drove my dick all the way into her. I swelled once, and then released, groaning loudly as my cock spasmed, firing my hot ropy load into her.

"OH FUCK OH MY GOD!" She screamed as her body began to shake. If I hadn't held her hips so tightly, she would have fallen over. One of her fists pounded against the glass as she screamed out, "Ahhhhh! AHHHHH!!! Fuuuuuuuuuuuuck!"

Again and again, my cock twitched, spasmed, and spat hot cum into her pussy. I could feel it gushing around the edges of her tight little pussy and dripping down to the shower floor as I continued to thrust into her even as my mind spun and reeled from the power of my own orgasm. Yet still I came, flooding her pussy with my cream, until she finally pushed away from me, pulling herself off my impaling cock, and falling to the floor, kneeling with her back against the glass.

Still my cock fired off a few more shots, the hot ropes of cum splattering on her freckled face, mixing with the water from the shower to run down her face and onto her tits. I looked down, gasping and panting, as my cock finally stopped shooting, but slowly drooled a few more drabs of cum downwards to the tile. Erin's pussy literally was leaking my white spunk and I realized that was not a normal orgasm by any means. I'd never cum that much, ever. I doubted anyone had. I wondered if it had something to do with the 'gift' that Brookesbend had 'given' me in exchange for my seed.

"What the hell...." She muttered as she sat gasping and twitching on the shower floor.

I looked up and realized why she'd been shocked. All of the water in the shower was floating, hanging in mid air. It reminded me of the videos I'd seen of astronauts playing with floating balls of water in zero gravity. Each individual droplet of water was simply hanging, stuck in mid air. The water that was coming out of the shower was forming an ever growing ball right around the head of the shower. I quirked an eyebrow and reached out and touched the giant ball of water around the showerhead. As my arm moved through the suspended droplets, they clung to me.

Then my finger touched the giant ball and everything 'started' again. The ball of water came bursting like a water balloon outwards. It's spray drenching both Erin and I, and all of the droplets of water that hung in the air fell as they should. The shower began spraying normally again.

Erin looked up at me from the shower floor, the spray now hitting her in the face and rinsing my massive load of jizz away, and she asked, "Mike, what the hell was that?"

I looked down at her, at my slowly deflating cock, which was still very slowly leaking pearly white jizz, far more than any five men should have ever produced, and thought of the 'gift' that the water nymph had given me. But to the pretty redhead prostitute that was going to be staying with me for the next week, I gave the only answer she could possibly comprehend.

"I don't know Erin... I don't know."

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rhevrhevover 10 years agoAuthor
I'll have to go back and re-edit then

I'll have to go back and re-read and re-edit then. As mentioned in previous chapters I had a catastrophic hard drive crash that caused me to lose several chapters of this story that I had written, as well as the other I'd been writing and a third that was about six chapters long.

Apologies for the inconsistencies.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
superb story

Whilst I must echo everyone's sentiment and state that this is a superb story (the character development is particularly impressive), I agree with the previous comment about there being contradictions especially as to the nature of hair growth on Mike's body. On several occasions you have given used the impression that hair now grows on Mike(like with him requiring a barber), you however contradict yourself later by stating that he is completing hairless except for his eyebrows. The fixing of those little contradictions would be appreciated. Thank you for a great story.

rhevrhevover 10 years agoAuthor
re: cracks in the story

You're jumping into the story at chapter 13 but you're complaining about cracks in the story? That doesn't really make a lot of sense mr. anon.

Mike isn't 17, 21, nor was he born in 1996. Mike Naughton the main character in the story is 39 years old. The story as it currently is set is summertime in 2009, and Mike was born as "Micheal Gray" in the year 1970. However as part of the story (in chapter 5) he had his entire identity as Micheal Gray wiped out when he, with the help of Adam and Renia, faked his death. As a part of his new identity Renia, a 'body shaping' mage, sculpted him a new body and as a FBI agent crafted him a new name. Part of that body sculpting was that she made him completely hairless, and only after he complained, did she allow him to 'regrow' his eyebrows.

I always appreciate feedback and comments, but I'm sure you gave this chapter a lower ranking because you didn't understand these things. Things that you would have understood if you'd read the earlier chapters.

Would it make sense to pick up a copy of Moby Dick and flip to chapter 13, then start complaining about why Ahab is being so aggressive? Would you throw the book down and say "Well, I don't know who Queequeg is! This book is inconsistent!" No, of course not. Just like it would be insane for me to try to recap every single thing that happened in previous chapters in each chapter as I write it.

In a slight nod to the fact that readers often wait weeks or longer between chapters, I do allow slight nods of recap in my chapters, but try to weave them into the narrative. For example early in this chapter I mention Ruby, Adam, and Emily when talking about Mike's 6th sense, which is a nod towards the fact that those three characters aren't human (being a succubus, and two mages respectively).

Now, in fairness to you mr. Anon, maybe you didn't see that the title of the story was "Old World Magic Ch. 13" and thought that this was a standalone story. If so, I understand and forgive you. I hope that if you ever do read this, by way of apology you take the time to go back and read the other chapters, and if you like them, give them 5 star ratings. I think if you liked this chapter, save the 'inconsistencies' born of your own ignorance of previous chapters, you'll end up very much enjoying the story as a whole (or at least as it's written so far).

In any regard, should you read this message, I hope that your confusion is now cleared up.

Regards,

-Rhev

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great story!

But it is kinda annoying how you have inconsistency in the story. mike was born in 1996 but just turned 21??? That should make him 17. And mike also had a barber shave his bald head that never grows hair? I really love how well this story has been shaped but these little cracks in the story line really kill the emersion.

rhevrhevover 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you to everyone for the feedback and comments, both here on the story and those of you who have sent direct feedback to me. I really appreciate the votes on my stories, and the consistently high votes really keep me motivated to try to keep providing for you all. It tells me that I'm doing something right and that you appreciate it. I just submitted (monday morning, sep 23) chapter 14, and I can promise you it's a bit longer. Chapter 14 is almost twice as long in fact. For those of you who wanted to see a slow increase in Mike's powers, you'll be pleased, and I hope everyone else enjoys it as well.

I've just started writing chapter 15, and I'm going to try to post a chapter at least once a month, and as often as every two weeks if I can.

Once again, thank you for enjoying my story, and I hope to keep providing for you.

-Rhev

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