Orc Dominion: Zentara Ch. 06

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Jeanette flinched and whimpered, thinking that yes, it would really be bad. Still, she did want to spend more time with Agmar, and she did want to breastfeed him like she did when he was newborn. She also wanted to please Turogg, and make him happy. She supposed there would be a way to make sure she wasn't caught. The secret passage would apparently allow her to get to the servant quarters without being noticed.

"Very well, Chief Turogg...I will do it. I want to do it. I've missed Agmar, and the feeling of closeness between us when he suckles from my breast." Turogg smiled over at her. "Good girl, Jeanette."

"I have a question, something I've been wondering. Why is Agmar's skin green? Is that the color all orcs are when they are young?"

Turogg chuckled softly. "All orcs? No Jeanette. It is something that happens sometimes. Like how humans are sometimes born white hair and white skin. It is unusual to be sure, but not unheard of."

"Oh, I see..." Jeanette paused a moment. "Are there many half-orcs? I never see them in human lands, so I suppose they must all be with your people."

"You wouldn't know a half-orc if you saw one, Jeanette. They only look human when they are young. By the time they reach adulthood, they look like natural born orcs." Turogg laughed a bit. "When your boy is an adult, he will look like the father, not the mother. Well, maybe not. I assume his father did not have the green skin."

Jeanette shook her head. "No, he did not. I don't know who the father is, of course. I doubt I will be able to recognize the father in him, when he comes of age."

"Probably not. It is getting late, Jeanette. It is time for me to go. Do not undress for me tomorrow night. Instead, put on a pretty dress. I have a special plan for you. I think it will be most fun." Turogg grinned and climbed out of bed to fix his clothes.

"Yes, Chief Turogg. I'll wear something nice. May I know what it is? I need to know if it's a dinner, or a ball, or something else so I know what type of dress to wear."

Turogg stared at her a moment. "There are different types of dresses to wear for different things?" Turogg shrugged. "It won't matter. Wear something nice." Turogg left to go to the secret passage that would let him out of the room. "Sweet dreams, Jeanette."

"See you tomorrow, Chief Turogg." After the orc left, Jeanette wrapped herself up in her blanket and rested a hand on her sperm filled womb. She looked over the side of the bed at the broken bottle and puddle of the pregnancy preventing tonic. This was a turn she hadn't anticipated. She could no longer control if, or rather, when she would become pregnant. If she continued on like this with Turogg, it would only be a matter of time before she had a grey baby suckling from her nipple alongside a green brother. If Jeanette wanted to avoid having his baby, she needed to get him in the field against Heste as quickly as possible. That would give her time to solidify her position enough to not be threatened by any rumors or accusations. At the same time, Jeanette felt a longing in her heart to have his child. If she weren't a queen, she'd want to stay with him. On some level, she knew it wasn't a healthy attachment, but there it was. Jeanette didn't know what precisely it was about Turogg that attracted her so, besides his near overwhelming virility. Maybe it was due to her obsession with orcs; with Turogg being the chief, he was the ultimate fulfillment of that fantasy.

Regardless, she knew she would have to balance her own feelings and the good of the Kingdom. It was already becoming difficult for her to deny him in negotiations, and it was becoming harder for her to develop compromises that were more favorable to Zentara than the orcs. As Jeanette drifted off to sleep, she resolved to try and suppress her feelings more, though a weight in her heart suggested she would not be able to do so.

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emmakendrick01emmakendrick01about 10 years ago
A political minefield!

First off, I commend you for writing an erotic literature piece that manages to focus very well on both the erotic and literature parts of it. The erotic parts are steamy and just long enough and detailed enough to paint a picture and allow our imaginations to fill in the gaps. At the same time the literature parts are well thought out and have a strong foundation of dialogue that isn't at all confusing.

Secondly, names and places have been selected well and I never find myself "Wait what was that again?" Which is very helpful! I find that I'm easily able to keep track of the events, the people, and the locations.

Lastly, keep up the good work! I look forward to the next chapter and more lustful romances.

OrcDominionOrcDominionabout 10 years agoAuthor
thanks again

Thank you all for the comments. With all the anonymous comments I can't really direct replies but I will try.

Last commenter, I don't know what you mean by "too evenly" or "pepper" but I think you will be happy with the next chapter.

Other commenter, I am glad you enjoy the story even if pregnancy/impregnation is not your thing. The story is about halfway done so there is still a ways to go! The last third will be very plot heavy so I think you will enjoy that more.

Other other commenter, I am pleased you stuck with it even though orcs are not your thing. They are the focus of the story, but as I just said the last third is plot heavy so hang on a little longer!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Excellent novel, this big event on this site.

I understand that at you the draft copy of the following part is probably already ready and there is a synopsis of all work.

But nevertheless I will make some remarks.

The narration goes too evenly, there is no a little pepper, especially in sex scenes.

Princess enjoys a large number of sex why - not to add group sex, double and triple penetration. I don't like idea of repeated pregnancy, but the risk of it was - is interesting. It is possible to consider also option of pregnancy of the human woman from orks only from cocktail of sperm of several orks.

Sorry for possible mistakes, English not my native language!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I wonder if it ever comes a plot point...

where both the Chief and the brother die, and Jeanette uses her half orc son to gain control over the orcish clan.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

thanks again. I still like your story eventhough I am not much into the whole pregnancy thing. but thats just me.

and I've come to enjoy thor background story and I am curious what will happen to the lands of Zentara. I just hope it turns out "good" in the end for the princess. she is a loveable character and it would be sad if the story would finish with her in some kind of slavery

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