Our Little Secret? Ch. 02 Expanded

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Jill hesitated, then, "Any special people?"

"No. I don't even think about girls."

From this point their conversation became the normal sort of chat between two people who haven't met for a while. They both realised, with a sense of relief, that they were not talking about their problem. Totally civilised!

"Would you like a bite of lunch?" said Mark out of the blue.

"Oooooh yes please! Have you got something in or are you going to take me out?"

"I'm sure I can find something in the fridge."

"Let me help?"

"Fine, you know where things are."

This time, as Jill left and offered her cheek, Mark bent and gave her a little kiss. She left with a smile on her face and turned to give him a wave as he stood in the doorway.

Their next meeting was a dinner date. It went smoothly and anyone watching would have thought them a normal attractive couple doing what couples do.

They met twice a week for the next couple of months and Mark was starting to relax in Jill's company. He looked forward to each meeting. The bad dreams had almost stopped and often he could even think about Jill without seeing his mind's awful pictures of her with Kyle. Although there had been as yet no sex in their new relationship, they kissed on meeting and parting. After the third date he took her back to her room, but left her at her door. Jill constantly gave out those subtle, and sometimes not so subtle, signals that she was more than ready to re-establish their full relationship as a married pair. Mark was not so sure. He thought about it a lot, what healthy young male with full working faculties wouldn't? The memory of those rough sleepless nights and the bad dreams still held him back. Like the memory of any great pain, there was a reluctance to re-enter that world.

When it came, the change came suddenly.

One afternoon at work Mark suddenly realised he was ready. He had caught himself thinking of Jill, albeit subconsciously, in a sexual way. The juices were rising! He wanted Jill. He needed to take her and re-establish his sexual mastery, and he needed it NOW! Immediately he went to his boss and arranged an early finish. Tonight was not one of their regular meeting nights but he could go to her room and he knew she would already be there as her work finished earlier than his. He would doubtless get her into bed before they even began to discuss their evening. There wouldn't even be anything to discuss as they had MAJOR sexual matters to catch up on.

With mounting excitement Mark strode the few blocks to the building where Jill lived, ran up the steps and banged on her door.

Jill opened the door.

She went white. Mark could see past her into the room where a large man was seated.

It was Kyle.

Time stood still. Nobody spoke. Eventually;

Mark said,

"I guess its Your Little Secret."

He turned and left.

I preferred a happy ending, as per my first version, but nobody else liked it and several complained that the story was too short and undeveloped. I tried to extend it to a better-defined happy ending but it was just petering out. In real life I'd want a happy ending but this just a story isn't it? (Some commentators don't seem to realise this). At least this should satisfy the 'once a cheater always a cheater' gang. Just a nice thought: - my story is now almost exactly the same length as the original by Tony Stark, which inspired it.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

His analysis of the points in time he could interven and the reasons why he didn't was really off base and erroneous. Quite simply by doing nothing and watching from thr closet, he picked the worst of all possible scenarios. Those images would scar him forever, including how much she enjoyed it, the guy Kyle being more endowed and her giggling at the end and thr "our little secret". His concerns about spying and passing her off are nonsensical. Again any consequences are less painful than what he did. And his worries about her delaying a tryst with Kyle, while possible, don't factor in that he might shock her out of it, not to mention, at that point if she goes through with it after intervention, then just go scorched earth, no regrets. In the mean time there are options like counseling if he intervened and he felt he could not trust her. Intervene late enough, say on the night of the reunion, meeting her at the door as she drives up with Kyle, and demand a separation. But all he did with his inaction is get a horrible PTSD like experience, replete with images of their fucking, her sounds, and her "our little secret" giggle. That shot scars for life! I suspect author will add a teist regarding the Kyle reappearance. She seemed genuinely distraught, and prior to that highly remorseful. They fucked up by not going to counseling and trying to do it themselves. After all reconnecting for sex is not a solution to their problems. She fucked up and owned it, but her confession is moot because he witnessed it all in real time, and did nothing. Hence he is in a miserable state. What a colossal fuckup. Always intervene. I woukd have waited to the night of the reunion. Either show up at hee reunion or wait when she comes back home. Btw he saw the Facebook posts and knew almost certainly what would happen. Lost opportunity. He isn't very bright. His self rationalizations as to why he just let it play out and watched is pretty nauseating.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Yuck

iameaseliameaselover 2 years ago

Wow....the cliched moment of "One afternoon at work Mark suddenly realised he was ready. He had caught himself thinking of Jill, albeit subconsciously, in a sexual way." Only to find her fuck toy there.

I dont think I have EVER seen a worse cliched moment here like this in ages.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Like you I preferred the happy ending in your first submission. Unfortunately you fell foul of the trolls who inhabit this website. People who have shit lives and no love in it

If you are going to continue writing happy endings to stories like this then you will need to hardened your heart and just delete their comments. There's enough unhappiness in the world without authors bringing it into the fictional world as well.

The first submission was good but a little short.

26thNC26thNCabout 4 years ago
Stepped in it

She stepped in it for sure with Kyle being there. I hope he lets her go for good.

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