Our Little Secret Ch. 07

Love the story line

Great character development. Lots of twists and turns. It really shows plenty of thought and planning, on the author's part. GREAT JOB!

One pet peeve- in a fantasy story, I have no use for condoms. We're talking fantasy, with extra-human powers, for crying out loud. A little further fantasy that, maybe the girls are on the pill, taking chances, whatever. The condoms are like throwing a little cold water on an otherwise warm fire.more...

"[Lucinda] loaded illegal pornography of the worst kind on this work laptop in a way that looked like he was trying to hide it in the disk partition she dynamically created. Then she transmitted downloaded porn onward to other users."

It was necessary to ensure other people saw this pornography so that Brent could be convicted.

I'm sure if this comes out Lucinda will get a really light sentence as she was only doing it for her boss to ensure a false conviction. Perhaps Joel's lawyers could get her two hours community service?

As there has been no attempt by half a dozen kamikaze women to rescue Brent, presumably Brent is just guilty of looking like the man the three women were asked to I.D.

I like the story but not the 'justice'.more...

Fantastic Story!

This is a very well written story, with a good bit of steamy bits!
Yes I do agree with what one said, how Joel basically 'raped' those girls, but! some of that was before he understood what was happening, and the second bit was about finding out how much 'in control' of them he was. After that he still uses girls, but only if they express a desire to do so. And he did give that one girl a chance. Not much of one, but hey! it is a mind control sex story, lol. Sorry, but I do like the anal bits, lol. Anyways! Fantastic story, I check every day to see if new chapters are loaded. Please keep them coming!more...

interesting!

well, this plot is getting curiouser and curiouser!
reminds me of the "Loner Mentalist" series in mind control.
interesting how we quibble about morality in this forum, even though by being here we're interested in overriding people's wills for sex! lol!
but it is an interesting point. Joel is trying to police the catnappers especially if they're using their powers for extreme harm or murder. Yet he uses his powers to assert his own brand of justice when others can skirt the reach of the law. Makes me wonder who is on to Joel now and what he is being set up for and by whom? other catnapping guys? or maybe the girls?? do they have powers too that haven't yet been explored?
You write very well. You have a lot of technical knowledge that you impart to the story. It's intelligently written and I appreciate that. so much more than people crying out: FAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWKKKKKKKKKKK. lol. definitely not a fan of the anal though. ewww. that's meant for evacuation and not for exploration. IMHO. And you are sure cranking them out. Thanks... enjoying the series so far.more...

Seriously? Child porn?

The two of them were no different. Considering what he got women to do, essentially raping them and defrauding them, how is he able to judge another persons morality?

Sorry; but this was a huge pile of crap.more...