Out of Focus Pt. 03

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I frantically began to rub that stone for all it was worth! Meanwhile, I could hear the two Irish mob guys getting closer. Not now ... please don't let me get killed by someone thinking that I am Steadman ... Fucking ... Carstairs!

As dark as it was in that damned dumpster, I could not tell if the alternating eye dimming was taking place. It was just too damned dark!

Then the sliding door nearest to me opened and ...

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Louis ist a pathetic character. Why would he be concerned if anyone gets murdered?? He has that stone and just needs to rub it......

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanabout 1 year ago

slow, slow, slow but entertaining

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

this man is too stupid too live> you've made a character o brain dead I'm literally rooting for him to fail. bad writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Two comments. No man can be so stupid or unaware of what state the relationship of his marriage is in. Why do you authors feel ,when it comes to women,you have to portray men as humans that won't acknowledge what they see or hear see and put it together,then respond accordingly Instead of the "can't be" mentality.

not_a_viking_honestnot_a_viking_honestover 2 years ago

He really is a weak man, isn't he. I mean pretty darn pathetic.

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