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Click here"Look, what, did you imagine we were forever Jace? It's been great and I've had a hell of a lot of fun, but I think we've done all there is to do in this relationship. We are on the last hole now of the 18 and it's time to wrap it up. You need to get back to Portland and if you want to talk, we can do it in a few days, when you've had time to process this. Go find Chloe and cry with her if you need to. She can help."
And with that, she literally just shut the door in my face.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous4 months agoIf I was Jace, I would have walked out when I walked into Amy's apartment and saw both Amy and Chloe. This is another blindside, where the women thought they knew what a man needs, and Jace would have seen that.
In the end, the last paragraphs took a decent story, and dumped it. I am going to assume that chapter 4 is the final chapter of this dumpster fire.
ImNotanAnon10 months agoNot sure what the point of this chapter was? Did you fall into a Matt Moreau-style funk here?
