The magnitude of the emotions that stem from this relatively simple act, awe you both with its power. You feel very reluctant to release his now flaccid penis from your mouth, just staying there holding it. Sucking and milking gently, your tongue cradles his manhood, while your lover's breath eventually slows to a normal rate. Ben does the same, leaving his fingers deeply inserted to enjoy the feel of your last quivers and internal contractions as your powerful orgasm subsides. To him, it was so simple yet so absolutely beautiful and he laid his head back and just reveled in the exquisite pleasure of the moment his heart welling with the emotion.
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Thanks for the input, I really appreciate any tools that may help my writing. I'm just starting out and am experimenting. I agree with the comment above regarding 3rd person perspective but this was just an experiment.... What can I say, you're getting it for nothing... Thank you all for taking the time to check it out..more...
slow start
but got better as it went along. Would have been better in the third person
Great start & left me wanting more! Thanks!!
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