Overcome With Lust

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Dave pulled up his pants and underwear, tucking his shirt back in. She continued leaning back on her arms, legs open as she recovered. He stepped up between her legs and kissed her softly on the mouth.

"Thank you." He said, smiling. With that, he turned around and walked out the washroom door. The movie had finished and people were just beginning to pour out.

Kristan took a deep breath, pulled her bra down over her tits, and began to button up her shirt. Why did she do that? Why couldn't she stop it? Would her boyfriend find out?

She scrambled into her thong and pulled up her pants. Her heart was still pounding with excitement. A guy just shot his seed inside her and she didn't know his name!

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
disappointing

While this story is very well-written, it is much too brief in every way. The introduction to the characters is too brief, as is the background information to the story. The love scene is also much too brief. According, sequels are certainly warranted for what could be a very interesting longer story, should the author decide to continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
very hot

Love her inability to stop herself from being fucked by this sexy stranger.

There is something so hot about how the guy just continues on about his business while she dithers in indecision...

Love your stories...thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
very hot

Love her inability to stop herself from being fucked by this sexy stranger.

There is something so hot about how the guy just continues on about his business while she dithers in indecision...

Love your stories...thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
This girl would have required he lick her first

The writing is very good, but the story was a bit boring from a female's perspective.

This girl has a tongue piercing, a hot body, and young, with plenty available guys.

This kind of experienced girl is now more demanding on a guy and knows what she wants, regardless of how hot he is. Too many hot guys don't have a clue how to give a female an orgasm. A female knows if he doesn't know to lick her pussy and get her into an extremely "hot" state, he likely won't be worth the effort, and she won't suck his dick first. She knows better. She will go for the guy who can give her what she wants, hot or not. All females are aware of the guys who expect to get their cocks sucked, fuck, one little lick on the clit, then leave her to masturbate.

Guys who are good looking with big cocks rely too much on this and "think" they know everything they need to know. These guys are lucky if they get it once, because they usually don't get it a second time from a girl who knows what she wants. The female clit is first and foremost. 90% of females can not orgasm from their vaginas.

It was obvious this was a guy's story. Learn about the modern female and make it more realistic from a female's point of view. Yes, females have lied to males for years to keep from hurting fragile egos. Females, like males, need their most erotic sex organ licked and licked the correct way to bring the most eroticy. Until we write it correctly, males will continue to be misinformed about what females really want. The guys who get it right will get the girls and KEEP the girls.

Please take this in a constructive way as that is the way this is intended. You're a great writer. Your writing style is not my complaint.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Wow

One of the best ones I've ever read. My dick got so hard, I thought it was going to explode!

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