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They ground their hips against each other as his cock shot spray after spray into her, her own orgasm continuing to wash through her, explosive waves rocking her body with delight.
Moments later she whimpered with exhaustion as they both dropped slowly back onto the bed, their bodies worn and tired. Inside her clenching pussy she felt his cock growing limp as he laid atop her, his hand still holding locks of her hair.
Continued...
- COMMENTS
26thNCover 4 years agoMmmmm!! Mmmmmm! Mmmmmmmmm! Mmmmmmmmmmooooooooooh! Mmmmmmmmmmmmuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuggggghhhhh!! Pretty much tells the story of this epic.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoObviously dialogue is not your forte.Her mmmmm's and his monosyllables do not make for a very interesting story. Reads more like a teenagers wet dream than anything else.
the Ct. Yankee
Anonymousover 17 years agoIt was okay, but did we really need 2 pages of tit play and other fore play before the fucking? and what about the lack of proper dialog here? Only he talked, and then he said the same thing over and over. It was really just plain wrong. You have potental, but it needs to be developed.
Anonymousover 17 years agoMost of the story is excellent, but it does turn a person off when all they see her say is mmmm mmmmmmmmmm ughhhhhhhhhhhhh ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh mmmmmmmmmmmmm ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. See, looks boring; doesn't it? Would suggest that your next story have more words on her part.
Anonymousover 17 years agoYou received a 50 as a compliment in you actually wrote of characters of a male who dominated, but shows he cares in calling her angel and only gets to the bitch in the throws of fucking. That is reality and not degrading. She also is an inept lay which is how most women are.
You did not explain where the gals husband was nor a strong enough reason for adultery...everyone gets hot over someone and doesn't jump into bed with them.
