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We've become an old married couple for sure. The business is going well, the Kids are 15 now, and well educated, Carol saw to their online school work until they got to the high school lever, and she decided to more on with one of the workers we had here to upgrade the solar grid we have. They are happy living on the main island, we gifted a house, not a huge one but ocean front.
We take trips around, and they have lots of interaction with kids their own age. Little Sam, who is now taller than me, is dating a girl, nothing serious, and we've had the sex talk with the kids. They are very much like us, both red heads, and Sam is hung like me, and Sara is built like her mom. We are still clothing optional, but mostly we are clothed to some extent. The girls hardly ever wear a top except in the house. Sara choose to shave her pubic hair off, and being her father I couldn't say a word, but Susie told her guys love them.
Marc and Kelli got married, to different people ( I bet you though they were going to hook up). And had a kids of their own, about 2 years after we did. Marc had a girl named Ashley, Kelli had a boy name David. We see them, every now and then sometimes they have stay on the island other times we visit them. Once when the kids were gone we all got naked and went skinny dipping in the pool and hottub, but that was it. Our kids were friends but that was it.
When little Sam turned 19 he had his girlfriend over. We accidentally caught them in mom and dad's old spot one afternoon as we were taking a short cut to the lagoon. He was built for strength, his muscles rippled as he bounded into her pale white ass. Susie dropped her shorts and I fucked her from behind while we watched them. He was a little smarter than his old man at the time and had on a condom. Later the next year It happened, Sam got married to the girl he was dating when right before his 21st birthday...
I take the smarter thing back, I wouldn't change a thing about how things happened with them.
We offered them the guest house, but they declined, We offered them a house on the island, but they said they were going to her Mom's house for a bit, that she isn't doing well at all. A thousand questions later, we found they will be fairly close. Seems she lives in southern Florida right outside of Miami Beach on the coast line.
Sara, is living in the newer guest house now. Enjoying life, she goes to the mainland on the weekends, and sometimes has friends over. We leave her to her own devices when she has guests. She working on finishing her degree in literature and wants to be a writer.
Sara never got interested in anyone as of yet, she's now finished her degree, and is writing horror novels, and screen plays. She's got 3 Novels publishes and working on another, and she has been out pushing a couple screen plays, one might go into production next summer. Not bad for a 25 year old. Little Sam, well her won the lottery with his wife's mother, They are living with her mom, who is on her last legs, but has put him in charge of her trusts, house and everything including about 200 million dollars in her accounts.
Thanks to my photo books, things are pretty good, I've been hired out several times to do different projects. I'd never have to work if I didn't want to. I'm taking over Dad's publishing business soon. Him and mom want to retire to 'take it easy' like they ever worked that hard. The island is almost self-sustaining, we just need fresh produce from time to time. Actually we WANT it. We could live off the island if we had to, We have great fishing in the lagoon, fresh fruit from the trees, and our small garden and stock pile of food. Oh... I forgot to mention, I gave in and ordered the rest of the fencing for the island and got it installed. I was a bloody fortune to put a 8 foot steel fence around a 4 mile perimeter island. It's hidden mostly by the tree line, but our island is a fortress now. We are told the fence would stop a tank. Sara thinks we are nuts, but with her new found writing of horror novels, she approves.
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I'm breaking the story here... There is more to come. I'm going to go from a different viewpoint in the next story line. Same Characters, just a different view to this. Stay tuned it will get more interesting, More sex, more adventure, and something different. I hope you liked reading this so far.
- COMMENTS
Rapier875over 2 years agoThe storyline was good, but I felt the ending was weak and a big let down.
But it might just be me........
Rapier
Anonymousover 5 years agoI like your story, but you can easily improve it by working with one of the volunteer editors available on Literotica. I am not an editor nor do I want to be an editor, but my mind seems to be one of those which picks up on most spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors. It's frustrating for me sometimes, but I just can't help it. You may have run this chapter through spellcheck, but most of your spelling errors won't be caught by a spellchecker. Almost every sentence in your stories contain errors. If you are not able to see them by proofreading your own work, then you are in serious need of an editor. Following is a portion of a paragraph (which needed to be broken into several paragraphs) from this chapter in which I have inserted comments on most of the errors.
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I put it out there, "My dare is this, Take (take) your sister into your room and see where it goes." Without a word Sylvia stuck her hand out, James Grabbed it. And (grabbed it, and) they were gone from sight for the evening. We could hear them and it sounded like they were having run, (fun.) The three of us drank some more, a few more round and we were all naked. (... more, and in a few more round(s) we were all naked.) The one dare lead (led) to another(,) and another, until we well (were) in the bedroom, carol (Carol) with my cock in her mouth and Susie rubbing her pussy onto hers (Carol's). We never went as far as sex (this seemed odd because it's all sex, just not fucking), that is our rule. But Everyone (... rule, but everyone) would up (would end up OR wound up) eating everyone. And I finally got to fell (feel) a perfectly waxed pussy.
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I say this because I liked your story, but when I, and others, obviously, balk throughout the story due to simple errors, it really messes up the flow which you, as a writer, are trying to create. You may not be able to see these types of errors while proofreading your own story, but you can probably learn. In the meantime, please consult an editor. Even the very best writers use editors. Even Sara (from your story) uses an editor. ;-)
goducks1over 5 years agochange is always good. there was an idea put forth the end of the last chapter - maybe more sex, having an "incestuous" island. keeping or creating couples, kids growing up, having a relationship with each other AND their parents, anyway, i like the "island" concept.
