Paramedic Pt. 02

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Jared pulled Liam's tight fitting polo shirt over his head. He had raised his hands up in the air to help and fell backwards onto the bed. Jared looked at the beauty of the chest before him. The muscles, erect nipples and blond hair on the chest leading down to the treasure trail. The trail disappeared under the waist line of Liam's pants. It was so hot to look at. Jared undid Liam's belt and pants and couldn't help but feel Liam's hard cock in his jeans. It felt so nice and solid as well as being a good size. The 501's on Liam were not skin tight, but they did highlight his package and ass nicely when he wore them. Jared pulled them off as gently as he could, trying not to show he was enjoying it. Jared looked at Liam laying there on his bed. Absolutely stunning! He was so perfectly put together. His underwear was a light green bikini style and it accentuated the ample mound hidden under the material. As Jared was looking at Liam's amply filled underwear, Jared thought he may have to buy some of those for himself as well as some even briefer underwear for Liam.

Jared knew what he wanted to do with Liam, but it was not to happen tonight. Liam must be a willing and fully conscious participant if anything was going to happen between them. It must be for love, not just a primal release. He helped Liam up the bed further and packed a pillow under his head. He pulled the comforter up to under Liam's chin, accidentally yet on purpose brushing his nipples as he did so. Liam's skin was so soft, so warm and beautiful. He leaned in and kissed him on the mouth gently and said "good night sweet Prince."

Liam's eyes were closed, but he smiled and said "thanks Jared" as he dozed off.

Liam's face was handsome but it looked absolutely angelic when he was asleep. A wisp of his curly blonde hair had fallen across his forehead and Jared reached it to bush it off. Jared looked at Liam and smiled to himself.

Jared got up and went to the bathroom. He had to take care of himself or he would never get to sleep. It didn't take long to stroke himself to an orgasm thinking of that beautiful blonde man in his bed. After cleaning up, Jared climbed into the bed next to Liam. Liam moved slightly, rolling onto his side and putting his arm and head on Jared's chest. Liam went promptly back to sleep. Jared wasn't far behind him in falling asleep. His last thought was the morning. What would happen when they woke up together? He knew Liam had been hard as a rock earlier when they were tightly holding each other. He could hope and dream tonight as Liam held him and hope for the best in the morning.

Later that night, Jared had a vivid dream. He saw a riverbank near where he had his cabin. Walking along the riverbank was a massive black bear sniffing around some rocks and the edge of the water. In his dream, Jared could hear the cry of a bald eagle in the distance. The eagle was high above the tree tops floating through air looking down. He turned and began to descend in a circular pattern until the eagle landed on the ground near the bear. The bald eagle and bear looked at each other for a moment. Moving towards the bear slightly, the eagle extended its wing outwards. The bear sat down and its haunches and extended its paw towards the eagle's wing. When they touched, there was a blinding flash like something had like something had shorted out electrically. When the flash cleared, the bald eagle was sitting on the shoulder of the bear. The bear stood up and walked slowly along the river's edge. The two of them acted as it was not unusual for them to be this way. They approached a structure which Jared recognized as a sweat lodge. Sitting on each side of the sweat lodge entrance were four wolves, two on each side. They were lined up as if in an honour guard. The bear sat down on his haunches and growled loudly. The wolves got up and calmly walked into the structure. The bear looked at the eagle and they both let lose their growl and cry at the same time. The bear got up and walked into the sweat lodge with the eagle on his shoulder. The dream ended there.

Jared didn't wake up fully, but enough to know he was sweating and had a solid hard on under the covers. Jared reached under to reposition himself when he felt Liam was sweating as well. Liam was still lying on his side, right up against Jared. While Jared adjusted himself, his arm brushed Liam only to feel he wasn't the only one with a massive hard on. Liam must have sensed something because he repositioned himself and moved in as tight as he could to Jared, grinding his pelvis and hard dick into Jared's thigh. As Jared fell back to sleep he come to understand what the dream meant. The Creator had sent him a message. They both slept through the night with both men dreaming of what they hoped would happen in the morning.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loving the spirituality

You my friend are one of a kind! I have never read any story containing the level of spiritual involvement. I am really enjoying reading this so far and just wanted to tell you how happy I am to have found such a unique story :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Interesting

Whilst i enjoy how you are developing your characters and the story, i would certainly recommend you check your different languages. I am a fluent french speaker but couldn't understand what the french sentences meant. I got the words but not the meaning.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

WELL DONE VERY INTRESTING TALE OF LOVE . IT MAKES A REFRESHING CHANGE WELL DONE YOU . BIG J

TuckerMcCallahanTuckerMcCallahanabout 9 years ago
Chap 2

Hmm, as much as I feel like you've developed Jared, I don't get that same feeling of development in Liam. He seems worlds younger than Jared, and I don't get a feel for him. As a medic myself (I put myself through college that way) most of the guys I worked with either had hero complexes or were serious adrenaline junkies - those were the ones who couldn't wait for the next 4-alarm and who knew all the 10-codes backwards. Jared, with his powers, fits into the hero category. I don't get a feeling for where Liam fits, and since he has an attack of conscience in this chapter, I question if he'd remain a medic. I see him going to work in a nice nursing home where he could build relationships with all his patients. Am I wrong?

Regarding the overall story... I'm going to make a comment/suggestion that I rarely make, but it's about Point of View .You've written this in 3rd person, but it's very guarded. It's not an omniscient 3rd person that sees everything because we don't get the reactions to Jared's use of his gifts, we don't get scenes without Jared in them... what we really get is a 3rd person narrator that is kind of sitting back, detached, on Jared's shoulder. Even your attempts to leap off his shoulder don't go very far away. Like the ER nurse, who's pretty much only there to tell us Jared & Liam are two hot guys... which we already know. Consider.... Just *consider*... changing this story over to 1st person Point Of View. I know it would be a bit of work. A good editor could help you. But if the story were told as "I" with "I" being Jared, it would be much more intimate, and would draw your reader that much closer into what was going on. That ER nurse, for instance. She'd either get axed from the story all together, or Jared would end up commenting to *Liam* about her, "Yeah, that's (whatever her name is)... She hits on all the medics." Which would be a conversation starter.

BTW, I still found your dialogue stilted. I'd really recommend reading it out loud, or getting a program that will read it to you. I use Dragon and it's awesome. It'll even type for you if you're tired.

Ditto Cannd's comment on foreign language. If you're going to use it, put the translation in the piece somewhere for the reader. Personally? I thought the restaurant scene was contrived. These two guys are together all day. they literally live together for their shift - however long that is. My partner does twelve hours at a turn. That's not counting the time he's there showering if he's been puked, pissed, shat, bled, or spit on. The females of our household do not allow anonymous biohazard materials in the household washing machine. So if he has to dump laundry because he had no time to do it during his shift, that's even more time he's stuck at the station. My point is that if these two guys were going to have a heart-to-heart about their sexuality (because let's be honest, they didn't talk beans about Liam's emotionality in that restaurant) it would've happened while they were working and alone together.

Finally, Jared has (blue) balls of steel not to take advantage of his partner in his delicate condition. While the gooey romantic in me liked that, the lecherous slut didn't believe two hot dudes who've been prowling around each other mostly bare-assed would ever not fuck through their feelings and deal with the repercussions when morning rolled around. So that scene needs a little punching up, or down, or... whew. Balls of steel I tell you.

Good job, my friend. Keep at it. Writing is like meditating. You won't know you're doing it right until you look at the clock and realize you lost an hour and you feel fantastic. Be Well ~ Tux

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Liking this story

Interesting choice. I like the supernatural theme. What is he? An angel? They both seem good for each other and good together. Though Liam doesn't seem phased by all that speech about life's chosen path stuff Jared made. I would think that's a bit spiritual or weird if someone randomly came out with all that to me

A little proofreading would also help it to flow better.

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