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He cracked up at that. "Alright, you baby stop moving and I'll get you out!" He squatted down over me and flipped me over. I didn't realize how strong he was. His size was pretty misleading. With my head, between his legs, it looked like that his strength wasn't the only shock due to his structure. It looked like there was a pretty ample bulge above me, not that I much to compare it to. As he moved his hands around me to find the end of the blanket, I couldn't help but to start swelling up. (Fuck, this couldn't be happening.) I wasn't sure but it looked like his package was growing, too.
He giggled again, but it sounded raspy almost. Was it lust I was hearing? "Where the hell is the end of this blanket?"
I tried to answer but the only thing that came out was some husky mumbling.
"What was that, Luch?" He looked back at me and our eyes met.
Then he leaned down and our lips followed suit.
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Hey everyone! I want to thank you for sticking with my story, posting comments, and rating! I know I said I'd welcome any comments, but I'd like to edit that statement slightly now that I'm further in to the story. If you don't agree with my story, while apologize that you wasted your time, I ask you to please not feel the need to post a comment. It doesn't really accomplish anything. I'm well in to the story, and I don't plan to stop or change it. I had the big events planned out before I started and I plan to see it through to the end. I welcome any constructive criticism on any mistakes I may be making, or any way I can improve me style or technique. But please, no more criticisms about the story itself.
I'm debating about whether trying to post weekly 1-2 page chapters like I did with this one. Or try to post a chapter double that length every 2-3 weeks. Please let me know what you think!
One last note: I have several stories planned out for when I finish, Pathetic. But I haven't decided which to do first. I think I'm going to leave that up to you guys. So keep an eye out, because I'm going to post a list of options in one of the chapters closer to the story's end. Thanks again and happy reading!!
- COMMENTS
Heifelover 8 years agoLuc is just too funny. I just about laughed myself silly with the picture of him caterpilling around šššš
Love your story so far. One thing I find a little annoying is the repeated story in the beginning. It isn't nessecary I think āŗ
canndover 8 years agoWe've read this already for those of you thinking it is deja vu. Do we get the next chapter to replace it Kipp? I hope so :)
I didn't comment on this the last time, I don't think so....
I am super surprised that Brett would encourage Luch to go out with Justin. he's desperate to be with him, so why would he encourage that? While it could be a chance for Luch to work through some issues, would he want to watch them together now that he's working with them? Also, wouldn't he be taking a chance that it could work out and his chance wouldn't happen then? I'm very surprised since he seems to be pulling out the stops in a way that has to show Luch he wants more than friendship and he's said as much to luch. I'd have been interested to have had Maria turn the tables on him, and it would make sense with how blunt and perceptive she is, and ask why he'd be willing to take the chance. I think she'd also ask if he was prepared to watch them together if so or would he be working Luch and trying to get him to end it and be with him?
I'm curious as to why your chapters keep being listed twice in your story list in the profile.
Anonymousover 8 years agoPlease do the every week postings. I'm really eager to see where this story is going. Also you don't have to recap at the beginning of every chapter so much. The last few lines will do.
I really like Justin. I don't know how I feel about maria and Brett using him to pave the way for Brett though. But if things don't work out maybe you can do a Justin spin off sorry.
