- Romance
- Patrick and Cathy
- Page 4
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Click hereThe wedding was a simple affair in front of the justice of the peace. With Beth at her mother's side, Patrick and Cathy exchanged vows. Back aboard the RV, the newly married couple left Boston, heading west.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years agoPretty good story but the ending seemed rushed. At the end of page 3 they’re leaving Utah heading for Boston and in one paragraph on page 4 they’re in Boston. Just Married.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoYou tell great stories, but a grammatical editor would be very beneficial.
IntrospectiveWandererabout 9 years agoAuthorAs always, I do appreciate the feedback and constructive criticism. Hopefully, it will make future stories better and more fun to read.
It's always interesting to read the perspective of others. This one, for instance, has the comment that Beth was an intruder and not very respectful. A valid point. At the same time, I had one reader comment that a sequel could involve her more.
I doubt that I'll write a second chapter to this. But you never know.
