"So you really didn't mind?" I bit her bottom lip, terrified that I might have scared him with my random request.
His mouth was on mine in a flash, swallowing my breath and leaving me gasping. "Anything you want, Max. I'm happy to oblige, anytime."
I giggled again, my lips now tingling. "So I can still be selfish?" I let my hands roam around his chest and I felt him shiver as I traveled to the skin just below his naval. "I can convince you to take me to bed?"
He growled and pulled me in close for more kisses, "Baby, your wish is my command."
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Tricky
Read this perspective last and, while both views are sensitive and share similar eagerness, one part would have benefited with extra, different thoughts. The dialogue, obviously, is repeated and that means one perspective should contain something new, a fresh view or unexpected reaction. Still, overall, it's an entertaining two-piece and bravo for attempting a tricky style.more...
Hers > His
I have read both perspectives and like Hers way better than His. Forgive me. I have an affinity for female piano players. Being a piano player myself, I did not relate much to Geoff other than his treatment of Maxine. His character might have drawn me in if he was a musician also.
Your description of Max's thoughts is wonderful! I felt every feeling she had because I have experienced them all. Thank you for this series. I enjoyed both of them.more...
very hot story.
I like the perspective direction. Want to read his perspective, also you give wonderful detail. Sex was hot, made me hot... and wet... thank you
Enjoyed it
A bit long, but you did build up nicely to the sex and I enjoyed the story. Thank you.
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