Pick Up

PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here

Oh, God, I wanted this. I tried to hold on to all the sensations assaulting me, to the feeling of being completely connected to someone, to all this raw male power throbbing inside of me. Soon though, there was too much, and I gave myself over. He braced me against the wall and thrust into me, hard and fast. My mind blanked completely.

"Yes."

"Harder...harder...Please." I wasn't sure if I was begging or demanding as I spoke in time with the staccato rhythm of his thrust. My body stretched and expanded to accommodate him as he seemed to push even deeper, touching me where no one ever touched, taking me to places I had never been.

Big sure hands cupped my butt, holding me in place firmly, and I cried out when his fingertips brushed over the sensitive rosebud between my cheeks, igniting a hard climax so unexpected that I felt tears on my cheeks as the sweetness of it claimed me.

When I opened my eyes, he was watching me, his face close to mine, features taut, irises dilated. He was wild and yet completely controlled. I could probably ask him to stop right now and somehow I knew he would. He was different.

My muscles tightened around him as he seemed to get even thicker and heavier inside of me, and I knew he was probably close. His breath was laboured, his jaw sliding back and forth and his back turning rock-hard under my fingers.

"I want you to cum with me."

"I don't know if I can, that was so good I just--," I said on a half gasp, half laugh.

Something primal and deliberate gleamed in his eyes, and I knew my admission had been received as a challenge. It made me shiver.

"I think I can do better, losing is not an option," he said, teasing, but sounding completely serious all the same.

I squeaked as he pushed my legs up higher, his hips widening the space between my legs. He opened me completely and pushed the velvety hardness of his pelvis fully against the soft folds of my pussy.

He literally touched me everywhere, inside and out, and I dug my fingers into his shoulder blades reflexively. My head fell forward from the onslaught of pleasure. I couldn't move, pinned against the wall, but he was moving in all the right ways.

"Mmmm, that's it sweetheart," he crooned as his chest rubbed against my breasts, as the muscles of his abdomen ground against my clit relentlessly. I took my hand from his shoulders and grabbed both breasts pushing them together, letting him suck both nipples simultaneously; I was spiralling out of control.

Within seconds, I felt him shudder and buck against me while I melted in his arms, coming apart so completely I lost all sense of where I was. For several long moments there was nothing except for heat waves of pleasure pulsating, and him.

We stayed together on the wall, catching our breath and coming back down. When I felt him move, felt his body leave mine. He didn't put me down on the floor, instead, flipped me around easily and carried me with him to the bed.

Laying me down and moving over me, he stretched out beside me and pulled me onto his chest. The protective, gentle gesture moved me and tears threatened again for very different reasons. When one dripped on his chest he pulled back and looked at me with concern.

"Hey you ok?" he asked, studying me intently. But the panic or discomfort I was accustomed to seeing when men were faced with women's tears was absent. He was too much man to be scared by tears.

I nodded, smiling, crying, and feeling like a complete, naked idiot.

"I'm good...better than good. It's just that you're so good, and you're so...nice," I said lamely. The emotions I was experiencing, defied words.

I lay there held safely in his arms until the sun came up. Bright rays pierced through the curtains and spotlighted him like a wonderful David on display. The night was incredible and he was incredible, the most gentle, passionate lover I had ever had. So what now, I thought.

With no answer I closed my eyes and stole a few more minutes of ecstasy before the inevitable morning after.

Please rate this story
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
10 Comments
BenLongBenLongalmost 2 years ago

Well done girl! Hot and believable. And now if you’ll excuse me, the game is about to start and I’m going to go try and put into practice what you just taught me…

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 3 years ago

So...what if we do a reverse on this story!

I'll turn my back to you...

Okay, I'm ready!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Oh shit. I want you. Your mind, the way you write and if this is really your fantasy then I'm so much more turned on by you right now. What is your name? Sam? Beth? damn!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
You have written a truly erotic and entirely believable tale! Whew!

That was one of the most riveting and enjoyable stories I have read in a long while. Either you have one hell of an imagination, or are a wonderfully fortunate soul having experienced a serendipitous night the likes of which most of humankind merely dreams of having! Bravo, in either case!!

TheWriterTheWriterover 12 years ago
Why can't I have a night like this?

Some corny dialogue, but still entertaining, and definitely hot. We should all be so lucky to have a full night of ecstasy such as this.

Show More
Share this Story

Similar Stories

That's What Friends Are For Justin's best friend Samantha will do anything for him. in First Time
The Private Party Attractive couple attend a very private party.in Loving Wives
Donna Next Door Retiree takes care of neglected housewife - twice.in Mature
Sophie Submits to Bareback Lust When she meets Zach, Sophie is powerless to resist.in Erotic Couplings
My Experiment I go to a bar wearing my vibrator and get caught.in BDSM
More Stories