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&√ perplexed by lordslammy doggy comments
Technically title is not true
I am angered and insulted by them
CHOPSHOPPED- HOW CONDESCENDING!!!
HAVE TO BE MOTIVATED READER TO READ STORY IN ENTIRETY-DEMEANING TO BOTH THE AUTHOR AND THE READER-my attention was captured and held within the first paragraph
He implies you are a rank beginner and have miles to go to find your voice
BLACKRANDLE1958? Apologies is I spelled that wrong seems to disagree. Having read her examplary works and being a great admirer of her talent I READILY AND PROUDLY ADMIT HER PRAISE OF THIS STORY AND YOUR TALENT PUTS THE LIE TO lsd's indefensible and insulting remarks
Perhaps lsd needs time to develop his croaks
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&√ Sixth time
I have read this exemplary work a half a dozen times now. Once again I am awed by the talent that can combine thousands of disparate words to evoke a myriad of conflicting emotions in the mind of the reader.
In order, I went from being proud of the wife, to sympathizing with her struggle to overcome the increasing demands, at times drudgery, of being a mother and wife, to praying for her to be given strength, to shaking my head in disgust, to cursing her betrayal of her vows, to smirking when she received her comeuppance, to rooting for her revovery, to applauding her efforts to atone, to finally dropping to a knee in acknowledgment of her strength and character, and throught it all holding her husband -AND THE AUTHOR - in the highest of esteem
WELL DONE
THANK YOU FOR SHARING THE EFFORTS OF YOUR IMAGINATION
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marriage problems
Someone commented about all marriages have problems seeming to imply that her infidelity sprung from those problems and was excusable.
Cheating in an upstairs bedroom while numerous guests attend a christening party and being caught by two children and two adults is not in any way excusable.
I do not care how full of drudgery your days have become
Adultery is more than a mistake where she chose to give in and when is indefensible
Come on people take a moment to reflect on the where and the whenmore...
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The comment just befor mine and just after your's give me pause
Seems to me ''UNNAMED'' is as capable as anyone of a to be taken seriously comment
For a time I used a Literotica profile for comments but was deluged by mostly named commenters who disagreed with my courteous insights. So I dumped that email address.
Not sure where that prejudice comes from. I have read a number of scurrilous comments made by those with ''names''
MADE UP MEANINGLESS NAMESmore...
With such insight
into the wife`s feelings and her emotional state, surely the writer can only be a woman. I question the husband`s revenge liason, as with the steadfast character the author assigned to him I don`t think that would have happened. Notwithstanding that, I really did end up with a tear in my eye come the end. Really well done ! A real pleasure to see someone posting who can be up there with the best on the site. PW.more...
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