Play Testers Wanted Pt. 05

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"I will not fail you." Mystique promised him.

"You never have." He said and she left knowing she had been dismissed. "I look forward to sending you against your lover. Ghost Fire will perish at your hands."

The last words escaped his lips spoken barely above a whisper.

"I will tear down everything and everyone you hold dear. No one thwarts the will of Doom!"

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FseriesFseries11 months ago

Nice concept and story. Seems a little Mary Sue ish for so many awesome things being obtained so quickly and many times haphazardly.

Also, why was such a small amount of vibranium so guarded so that doom didn’t get it if one of his assassins was wielding and wasting vibranium arrows?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Awesome story

I have been blasting through your chapters since I found them. Awesome stories and premise. Keep up the good work..👍👍

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great...but

...just a pet peeve of mine: It's 'disoriented'. There is no such word as 'disorientated'.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
take you time

I would rather you heal and feel better than losing a great author I've tracked and been reading since you first posted. My meds are doing well so I should be around to see all of their ends

ZoconjaZoconjaover 4 years ago
Its fine

Take your time lostboy i was just wondering why they hadnt posted it yet take your time everyone who loves your story probably have great patience to be on this site.

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