Play Testers Wanted Pt. 05

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Lost Boy
Lost Boy
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"I will not fail you." Mystique promised him.

"You never have." He said and she left knowing she had been dismissed. "I look forward to sending you against your lover. Ghost Fire will perish at your hands."

The last words escaped his lips spoken barely above a whisper.

"I will tear down everything and everyone you hold dear. No one thwarts the will of Doom!"

Fade to black.

Lost Boy
Lost Boy
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 Anonymous3 months ago
Awesome story

I have been blasting through your chapters since I found them. Awesome stories and premise. Keep up the good work..👍👍

 Anonymous8 months ago
Great...but

...just a pet peeve of mine: It's 'disoriented'. There is no such word as 'disorientated'.

 Anonymousover 1 year ago
take you time

I would rather you heal and feel better than losing a great author I've tracked and been reading since you first posted. My meds are doing well so I should be around to see all of their ends

ZoconjaZoconjaover 1 year ago
Its fine

Take your time lostboy i was just wondering why they hadnt posted it yet take your time everyone who loves your story probably have great patience to be on this site.

Lost BoyLost Boyover 1 year agoAuthor
Delay!!

I posted part 6. It was returned and I am sorry to say my health has slowed down the rewrite of the portion that forced it to be rejected. It contained critical portions to progress two different story lines. I should be posting it again either Saturday or Sunday at the latest. Again, sorry for the delay.

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