Plotting a Course Ch. 16

byVaRiverWriter©

"Only one way to find out." Rob grinned and kissed my cheek while he sat back on the bed and watched me attentively. The package was a perfect cube, no larger than two inches per side. "I was going to give it to you for your birthday, but didn't want to ruin the surprise." I quickly untied the bow and threw the twine at Rob who caught it with a grin. The paper was easy to tear off and I stared as the glass cube in my hand. I twisted and studied it. Inside the box were two interconnected rings.

They couldn't be. I thought to myself. I kept twisting the cube in my fingers. I glanced at Rob who was smiling warmly at me.

"They are." He whispered.

"Our promise rings?" I answered. Still gazing intently at the treasure in my hands.

"Yup." He answered flatly. "It was kind of cool how the jeweler connected them. I knew I was going to get you a new ring, but didn't want to get rid of these."

"That's so sweet Robbie." I wrapped my arms around my husband's muscular body. "Thank you." I kissed his cheek.

"I love you Bobby."

"I love you Rob."

*****

This story will conclude in chapter 17.

Thank you for reading. Please let me know what you think.

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by kvegasgurl03/20/15

I love this story!

I have really enjoyed Bobby's and Rob's story and look forward to the conclusion. Thanks for taking us on their journey!

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by CuriousPete02/11/15

Wonderful Chapter

Really enjoyed this surprise. Like some others, I shed a few tears (happy ones) with this chapter. This whole story has been great and can't really imagine it ending yet. Nevertheless, I look forwardmore...

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by Gebas01/12/15

Totally made my evening

Was so waiting to read this chapter, and probably like most of your readers, a bit sad that story is going to end...

Keep up with good work!!!!

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by JKendallDane12/22/14

So glad to see you back at it!

Was all worried that you had been kidnapped by aliens or something and kept salivating for more of this story...even if it was to be the ending. I have to say GREAT JOB on the return chapter and will bemore...

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by Anonymous12/14/14

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I love this story. I just figured that the story was not going to be completed and you had gone. When this series ends I will look forward to more from you if that happens.

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