Poker Loser Ch. 03

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Goldeniangel
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"Oh..." she could hear her voice, loud and echoing in the room even though she didn't think she'd said it that loudly, "Oh... Oh my..." He was pumping harder and faster into her, grinding his groin on her clit every time he hit home. The combination of the intense foreplay, the fullness of her pussy, and the constant contact on her clit finally drove Allison over the edge, "OH MY GOD!!!!!... OH GOD TODD.... OH GOD..... OH TODD...." Her sweet and impassioned voice filled the room as she climaxed, wave after wave of pleasure crashing over her.

The fact that she was calling out his name while cumming, not to mention the incredible clenching and pulsing in her pussy, was making it very hard for Todd not to just blow his load immediately, but he persevered, wanting to draw out the pleasure for as long as possible. Pumping roughly in and out of her pussy, he drove her higher and higher on the crest of orgasm, it was better and more intense than any orgasm she'd ever had in her life, it seemed like it would go on forever. But finally Todd couldn't handle her cries of pleasure and his name anymore, and he thrust one last time, completely emptying his load into her receptive pussy. Feeling him cum in her pussy caused her one last, smaller orgasm, and she shuddered in his arms with the pleasure of it.

Lying there, he relaxed on top of her, enjoying the feeling of finally being between her legs, her soft and silky body completely open to his. Todd didn't move away from her until his dick was completely flaccid and had slipped from her hole, then he kissed her deeply, which she accepted submissively but didn't really respond to, and allowed her to get up.

They got dressed and walked out to his car in silence. On the ride back to her house Todd began chatting with her again, and she roused herself enough to make the effort to respond. It was a pleasant trip home for the most part. When they got to her house he kissed her goodbye, probing her mouth again and reaching his hands into her shirt for one last tweak of her nipples.

As soon as Allison got inside she ran to the bathroom, lifting up her skirt in front of the full length mirror, watching the cum slide out of her red, swollen pussy. Then, furiously, in front of the mirror, she masturbated, sliding her fingers in and out of his cum, lifting them to her mouth every so often to taste their combined juices. When she finally exploded in orgasm, it still wasn't quite as good as the one she'd had during the sex.

With the taste of their juices on her tongue, she slumped down in the bathroom and sobbed in self-disgust and humiliation.

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I hope you guys enjoy the way the story is going! if anyone has anything specific they'd like to see, please let me know and I will take it under serious consideration although I can't promise that I'll use it =) Thanks for reading!

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Marklynda2Marklynda2almost 2 years ago

And so the cookie crumbles.

Yes I do like the way this story is progressing! As I may have written earlier, nonconsent is not my favorite story type but as long as it not physically abusive I can deal with it as I myself have known some young women whom I thought needed to be taken down a notch. I find it interesting that you, a woman, seems to think some need that too. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

CharlieWanderingCharlieWanderingalmost 6 years ago
What an ending!

“Then furiously she masturbated...”. That one line turned this story from a 5 to a 10 for me. Masterful.

wolfgirlbiteswolfgirlbitesover 10 years ago

Each story is getting more exciting:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice

Wow, this is so incredibly well written. Grammar, usage, etc. was all pratically used without error. I am SO GLAD that you mentioned Allison realizing she is succumbing to Todd's manipulative ways when she started unconsciously thanking him when he allowed her some freedom (such as the simple act of closing her shirt when she walked to his apartment). The realism there reminds me of the actual complex that goes on within some rape and kidnap victims. It's sad, really. But it's great that your writing isn't just a bunch of "sexy" sentences strung together- it actually has thought and depth. 

I, just some girl with a miniture version of the Cinderella Complex, keep hoping to find a non-consent/reluctance story that ends up with romance between the characters when the guy starts realizing his love for the girl and stops his manipulative tendencies. Truthfully, I hated when Todd took away her anal virginity. And when he finally started fucking her vagina, I hoped that he would realize what he had done (or have her crying in front of him) and have him feel extremely bad. And then he'll repent on his actions and releave her of the blackmail. And somehow, they'll fall in love, go on a real date, and end happily ever after. Yeah, right. I completely understand that the category in which I found this story does not usually include happy-go-lucky endings like that. Oh well. Maybe not as many people have the same fantasies as I thought. In any case, I want to commend you for your brilliant writing (even if it IS a bit rougher than I hoped).

Everything- the chemistry between the characters, the stuff Todd makes her do- is just so hot. There is no other way to explain it. 

Anyway, I was going to talk about some other things, but I'm getting impatient- I want to read the other chapters already! LOL. Maybe I'll leave a more detailed comment when I finish this series. 

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
:)

It does amaze me how so many people complain about what they read on these sites. Seriously?? You thought you were going to read something G-rated?? What is the name of this site again??? DUH!!!

If you take a moment to stop the complaining and open your mind, you will enjoy it like the rest of us. The writer is not telling of a real life true story here!!

Goldeniangel, take it as a compliment...same as smiling and waving to a driver that flips you off. ;)

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