- Group Sex
- Pool Boy Ch. 59
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I watched her for a moment and said, "Don't worry about that. I have a feeling that this flight isn't over yet." Just then the door to the compartment slid back and Eva stood there. She was unbuttoning her blouse as she said, "Yummy. That sounded delicious. Do you mind if I join you." Alexis looked up at me and grinned before patting the sheets on the vacant side of the bed.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 6 years ago"Rap music ruined contemporary music for me." Hunter is what? 20? He grew up with rap as part of the mainstream culture. That is a line for a man that is very much over 50. It would have made more sense if you said he didn't care for rap and not like some old man who turned off the radio in the 90's.
That said, I'm glad you didn't present all the old references as something that's super common for young people like you usually do. I would like to challenge you to make at least one current reference next chapter. Anything. Have Alexis say she's behind on Riverdale. Because even young people who appreciate 70's era shit are still young people. I don't expect you to have characters saying "This is orgy is lit AF!", but be conscious you are writing 20 year olds. Not 50+ year olds.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoMaybe a committed and potentially expanding polyamorous relationship surrounding them? There is so much love between the characters and a polyamorous relationship would be a great idea, especially if it's centered around Alexis and Hunter.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoI thought this was a thrilling chapter. I like the way you are building your story around Hunter and Alexis. Some one comment that you should get Alexis and Hunter into the porn business. THhat would be a huge mistake for your followers. They don’t need to get involved with smut and sluts. That has not been the charteristics of their life together and would be a wrong turn for them. Also, when they should not get into a business with all their friends and family. You could never have a good business when you are fucking all of your employees especially now that H&A are thinking of being more committed to each other. Let Hunter and Alexis build their own lives together and bring the friends and family in only occasionally as just that, friends and family. You are a good writer so keep up the creative thinking and keep it exciting.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoOne of the companies that Hunter and Alexis might want to create would be a porn company with their friends, including the SH5 and a number of the cheerleaders and football players that Hunter trusts forming the basis of the company.
kaidmanalmost 6 years agoI enjoyed this newest edition as well as the whole wedding events thank you for your hard and consistent work
