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- Prison School
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He secretly really wanted Luke, but Luke was so hetero. Maybe, just maybe, if Luke had a couple encounters with a guy, he might become Bi? Mike had only seen Luke naked the one time, when they had to remove their prison coveralls, but that was enough to make Mike want him. Not that Luke was that well hung, but he did sport a nice 4" or 5" uncut cock that looked like it would be a delicious mouthful. Especially to a Mike that had never experienced sex with an uncut dick.
Jesse went to the closet, unlocked it and distributed the sheets, pillows, blanket and towels to Luke and Mike, the same as he did in Dorm 1 for Adam and Kurt.
Just out of curiosity, Mike had another question for Jesse. "Jesse, where is your bed?"
The answer came quickly. "Over in dorm 1, right next to Kurt." We can't help but wonder if Jesse might have had a thing for Kurt.
It is still a couple of hours before dinner time and some of the other trainees will likely be coming in around 5 PM. We're wondering what they're going to be like, and how they welcome newbys. Orientation is behind us. Dinner is in just a couple hours. Meeting our new roommates could happen at almost any minute.
Jesse noted that Luke was assigned bed #8, and Mike #11. "If you wanna eat tonight, be in the cafeteria about 6 PM. I'm outta here, see you later Ladies." Jesse giggled and left.
In chapter 2 our boys get to meet some of their new family, and learn more than they expected.
- COMMENTS
HornyKipabout 7 years agoI read your comments on how your characters get away from you. I have experienced that myself. Worst of it all, I don't know how it happens, and why I didn't see it coming till it's on the page.
Looking forward to the rest of the series.
William smythover 7 years agoThis looks as though It's going to be a great series.
The setting is ideal for some real good sex in the coming chapters.
So keep it coming.!!
Orion_almost 8 years agoFollowing are few suggestions you may want to work upon if you want to enhance your story writing skills:
1. Get an editor, for there are may spelling mistakes and grammatical errors in your writing. If you don't wanna hire one, there are many who volunteer here, like me. It will leave your readers satisfied with what they are reading.
2. Your story is narrated from the point of view of a first person, which is very ambiguous as it sounds like you're there witnessing this and it switches back and forth in first and third person. You either have to write from one of the guys' perspective for the first person to work out or just write the narrative in third person.
3. Even though this is fiction, it should sound original and not fake, like licking the cum off as a chore and stuff like two black guys will have sex and their beds are conveniently next to one another and very conveniently one of them is already thinking about making the other his bitch. I mean come on, this plot is so predictable and too convenient... Make it original and don't just make way for the guys to have sex, let the story carve itself out and the characters have an original journey of their own.. Let them flow.. Don't make things happen for them..
Please don't think that I did not like the story cz u actually did, kudos to your imagination, you just need to hone your talents.
Good luck
o2byoungalmost 8 years agoAuthorChapters 2 and 3 have been uploaded, and I'm working on C4. I'm losing control of the story! These characters have come alive and I'm just trying to keep track of their actions to get it written down. The characters are leading me!
There are a couple of emotional situations in 2 and 4. I don't know if other writers have experienced this, but when my characters cry, I have to get the tissues!
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoPlease get these two together -- they can make great music together! Anxious to see some hairy large-cock loving between them!
