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- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoI can't believe you left this story hanging like that. I was enjoying the story but now I feel like i wasted my time. D'Angela
dirtybear42about 19 years agoYou started out with an idea, devlpoed it in part 1 then, what, forgot where you were and stopped. Along with your grammer and gender blunders..........A TOTAL WASTE OF TIME
Anonymousabout 19 years agoThe only problem will be is you don't continue it!
Poor guy is still transpiring...
Lukas
Johnny_PTabout 19 years agoAuthorHi there
I would like to thank you all for the comments, and I am very sorry for the enormous amount of grammatical mistakes in my story. I re-submitted this chapter so that most of them get corrected. I definitely need a proofreader, because very often I let lots of mistakes in my stories, even if I proofread them myself and use a spell checker. You see, I am not an English native speaker, so I need all the help I can get. I have already contacted some editors in the volunteer editors page, but so far got no answer. Therefore, if you would like to be my proofreader or you know someone who would be willing and capable to be one, please let me know.
Johnny
