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Luminia had also called to some other women that were in the group, relaying the instructions in the use of these new weapons to them. Confident that Pree and Korsa could handle the instruction, Inari excused herself to go and arm up. Trotting back inside, it didn't take long for her to locate and assemble her power armor. Since it was jostled around in their crash, the entire suit was still here, as it was likely mistook for junk when the invading males had plundered their ship.

Inari then took her armor with her as she climbed the ladder and retreated to her quarters. Stripping down out of the rank clothing, she shivered as the cold air hit her nethers, sapping her of any heat she had built up during the run here. Wasting no time, she rummaged around her ravaged cabin and found some intact underwear and tight thermal clothing, which she donned. She picked the thinnest clothing she had, to ensure that she would still have full mobility while she was in her armor.

Once dressed and satisfied that she wasn't going to freeze, she popped into her vacc suit, closing it around herself. The moment it was sealed, Inari then slipped into her armored boots, then her leg plates, working her way up her body, until she was fully armored. With everything locked into place, she activated the power unit in her suit, which started up the suits locomotion systems, allowing her to move virtually unhindered with the added weight of the armor.

She then grabbed her helmet and started out to the ramp leading out of the Darkstrider. As she negotiated her way through the sea of junk that littered the area, the comms console lit up and a message came through.

"Darkstrider, Darkstrider, this is the Perseus, do you read? Perseus calling Darkstrider, you have missed your last check in and we are unaware of your status. Please respond, over," Alexander Tomisic's baritone voice came in over the channel. Breathing a sigh of relief that there were still some things working on the ship, Inari walked over to the console, to answer the call.

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I know, I hate cliffhangers too, but as a writer, I find that they can be quite fun to write about! OK, I'll stop my evil gloating right now! Much is going to be happening quite soon, so stay tuned for the battle to come and the resolutions to be had among several characters.

There will be a great deal of changes ahead for the entire crew of the Perseus, some interesting and others.....well, you'll just have to wait and see.

Anyways, thank you for taking the time to read my work and I do hope that you've enjoyed it! I'm open to constructive criticism and will seriously consider any suggestions made about various story arcs. Please feel free to rate and comment on my work down below. If you like what I write, don't be afraid to follow and share, though your views, ratings and comments are quite enough for me.

In the meantime, this is C.H. Darkstrider, signing off to grab a beer and some quality time with the wife! ;) You will attain whatever you most desire, as long as you believe in yourself. Cheers!

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Michael56SmithMichael56Smithover 1 year ago

Oh, and to put my 2 cents in, firehorseuk, I think Korsa is very good at reading people, and she found a very skilled and creative way to communicate with the blue folks, through their mutual language barrier, ... anyway, just my thoughts on it, ole C.H. just might have made a good call on that scene, .... ;-) TTFN

Michael56SmithMichael56Smithover 1 year ago

Alright, as cliffhangers go, this one wasn't too bad, but watch it, ... ;-) TTFN

firehorseukfirehorseukover 1 year ago

"To demonstrate her point, Korsa launched into several sword forms, ...". Sorry, but I found this very jarring because its seems very out of character. They've just broken out of jail and a highly trained elite royal guard poses giving a demonstration of several forms! Seriously not a good use of time during a jail break! Find an object, throw it in the air and 'dazzling display' cut into 4/8/16/32 whatever number of pieces is enough of a (plot point) demonstration of skill. Just my feedback. Thanks for the hard work in putting a story up.

Michael56SmithMichael56Smithover 2 years ago

I hate the cold!!! Brrr! Those poor blue to purple, four eyed folks,.. I'm rereading these chapters, so I'll just jump to the next one now,.. boy I like not having to wait,.. and by the time I get all caught up, you will have dropped your next chapter, so win-win,.. ;-) TTFN

C.H. DarkstriderC.H. Darkstriderover 3 years agoAuthor
Update inbound!

As the title states, there is an update inbound for this story. I went back and made some adjustments and tweaks to the story as a whole, from chapters 1-18. They have been uploaded and just now awaiting moderator approval. I'm always in a constant state of updating things and going over my old work, to polish it up so it meets my current standards. Lot of things I thought would fly, just don't for me anymore as my skill level progresses and as I learn more about what works in a story. I take no issue with constructive criticism and even welcome it! But if all your going to do is point out the negative and troll me, consider said negativity blocked and erased. So, to everyone who points out the mishaps I make, thank you. You help me sharpen my skills as a writer and drive me to do better! I thank anyone who wants to see the story get better and hope that you all continue to enjoy it! Cheers!!

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