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Anyway, thank you for taking the time to read my work and I do hope that you've enjoyed it! I'm open to constructive criticism and will seriously consider any suggestions made about various story arcs. Please rate and comment on my work down below and ask me questions if you wish, as I love hearing from my fans! If you like what I write, don't be afraid to follow and share, though your views, ratings and comments are quite enough for me.
In the meantime, this is C.H. Darkstrider, signing off to grab a beer and some quality time with the wife! ;) You will attain whatever you most desire, as long as you believe in yourself. Cheers!
- COMMENTS
Dogmancyprusabout 1 year agoI'm tending to skip over the sex, as it is tending to get away from the story. Otherwise a good read.
nthusiasticabout 1 year agoFor the Sake of Fair Play
You are going to recruit some more men at some point, aren’t you?
Anonymousover 1 year agoWhat did Shazza do to the freshly minted Commodore and Lieutenant?
Interesting days (chapters) ahead.
C.H. Darkstriderover 1 year agoAuthorAs the the title states, thank you for your critiques! They are not only appreciated, but highly welcome! It's these points that drive me to do better as a creator and writer! After reading them, I started to think what I could do to improve this chapter and then the most brilliant idea came to me! I will get it written up today and submit the improved copy before the night is over. Thanks you for pushing me to be a better writer guys!
@Anonymous: You weren't being too much of a dickhead. In fact, thank you for the proverbial slap upside the head. I sometimes need that just so I can straighten things out.
Thank you all for reading my stories and I'm glad to hear that you're enjoying them! Don't worry, as more chapters of this story will be landing soon, as I am already well into my Writer's Gambit! For details on that, have a glance over at my Patreon page if you like. Thank you again for all the encouragement and critiques! Cheers!
