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I was already formulating plans on how I could use this to my advantage. Getting Mike's sister Anna to sit down at the machine would give me a beachhead wherever she worked. From there I could work my way up the chain until I controlled the entire firm. Hand pick a selection of the right clients and... Not a bad way to make a living- with a platoon of legal experts slavishly devoted to my well-being.
I was so busy thinking of angles I could take and looking up the name of whatever test it was that she must have been having problems with that I barely even noticed the short walk out to meet her. Any doubt I had about the plan I was developing evaporated the moment I saw her- as did half of the plan itself. Don't worry, I picked up the pieces later- after she left. "Sorry, Mike. But absolute power and all that."
Mike introduced us. "Anna, this is Ben- a friend from work." The family resemblance was immediately obvious and I was forced to re-evaluate my estimate of Mike's attractiveness to the female half of the species.
"Great. Another Janitor," She said impatiently after sucking a small bubble of gum into her mouth and cracking it to release one of the most annoying sounds I had ever heard. "A pleasure to meet you. Can we go now Michael? I have to get back to work."
Okay. So she was a looker, but her personality would need some work. Good thing I had a machine that could manage that. "So- Mike here tells me you were having some trouble getting into Law School."
Mike glared at me as he got into the cherry red convertible his sister had arrived in. Don't ask me what type- I couldn't care less beyond the fact that it looked like three times the car I could ever have hoped to own.
Anna was giving me a similar look that warned me I was about to lose her. "What if I told you I had a way to help you pass that test that was completely legal, and 100% legit?"
She snorted as she slipped into the car, already dismissing me. "I'd say I've tried every test prep program out there and none of them worked. But first I'd thank you for insulting my intelligence."
I leaned in, placing a hand on the windshield as I attempted to channel the confidence of a man who already had one sex-slave, and was seriously considering adding a second. "Trust me. You haven't tried this."
- COMMENTS
EugeneSelfishabout 5 years agoRachel actually says "no" to Ben at least three times in this chapter. I was kinda hoping she would be forced to come up with creative ways to deny him without explicitly using the word "no". 😄 It's tricky to perfectly follow the 'rules' literally in a story like this, so I only consider this a minor oversight in an otherwise excellent story, but thought I'd mention it anyway.
Anonymousover 6 years agoI really enjoyed Rachel's POV. That added a ton of heat to it, and if there's one thing I love about MC stories it's the unintended consequences of things. A poorly-worded command can lead to a whole world of possibilities, as you've shown.
I hope you'll keep up with them! One thing I would have loved to see, and which I think you've set up quite nicely, is for Rachel to make Maggie subservient to her. Rachel doesn't seem jealous of Maggie, but she does want to make sure her Master is safe and protected. So it seems logical that she'd find a way to slip some obedience commands into Maggie's training just so Rachel can be sure she's fully onboard with the her Master's best interests.
Plus, I think it'd be seriously hot if neither Maggie nor Ben ever saw the subservience to Rachel as something unusual or abnormal. While the reader can see the commands slipped in there and understand what's happening, the "victims" might see it as a cutesy affectation or a natural evolution of the girls' relationship. In the end, Rachel has solid control over all the women in Ben's life. Ben gets Maggie in a non-slave way that he seems to want. Rachel gets to play with Maggie as her toy when Ben isn't around. Everyone's happy.
There are a lot of ways to go and I can't wait for the next installment!
qwartxover 6 years agoThe shift to Rachel's POV was a great twist. You've gone back to Ben's, and I feel like you have gained momentum. This chapter's move to strengthen Ben's resolve and remind him that Rachel is a willing participant now, and now we have his next target and the beginnings of a plan. Perfectly done to encourage me to read the next chapter.
Now I wait eagerly.
Anonymousover 6 years agoGoing after friends and family members just complicated things. Ben doesn't seem to think very strategically.
Also be careful of your story focus.
Dominantwhisperover 6 years agoPlease keep up the excellent writing! Can't wait for the next chapter!
