After hours of tossing and turning, I still couldn't sleep. I was so at odds with myself, and I couldn't fall asleep until I had some resolution. I flicked the lamp on, and sat up on the edge of the bed, and stared into mirror. I looked myself over, up and down. Was I ready to commit, ready to submit to another? I imagined her words to me: will I make myself hers?
"Okay," I said aloud...
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Sorry! I hate when my favorite authors leave it at a cliffhanger, but I couldn't resist. I do apologize for the abundance of plot, but I promise there will be lots of kinky, dirty, asexy fun coming up. Big shout out to Visioneer for being my wall to bounce things off of, and you can thank him for giving me a little inspiration when I was running low on it. Please, please let me know what you think, I love feedback!!
In other news, I may have to limit how much I write while riding public transportation. I'm really self conscious that someone is reading over my shoulder...
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good so far. please go on soon...
Great story, I have enjoyed reading it and despite the cliffhanger it gets better by the chapter.
Another excellent chapter. Great story.
Good story!
This is really good stuff! Well written. You have developed the emotional tension and internal struggle that makes it feel real. Can't wait for more.
I thought you were done after Chapter 5...
But you've done a fantastic job of keeping the story real, and dealing with human emotions in a sexy way. Thanks for writing it! It just keeps getting better.
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