Rain Falls Ch. 04

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Trahi
Trahi
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I shimmied up his legs and reached behind me to line his mammoth cock up with my anxious hole. "We're going to go slow at first. Ok?"

He nodded and I inched down his length. He tossed back his head and his eyes rolled back. "Fuck," he groaned as my ass swallowed his tool.

I was panting and sweat was running down my spine by the time I got to the bottom. I didn't think it was possible but he felt bigger inside me in that position. He gripped my hips and examined my face when I didn't move.

"Just a second," I panted. "Feels like you parked a Peterbilt in there."

The waiting, giving me time to adjust, was something we just didn't do and I didn't know how long his patience would hold out. To give him credit, he didn't move. He didn't act impatient. He just held my hips in a firm grip and studied my face. I wasn't in pain. There was plenty of moisture from the huge deposit of cum that he'd left inside me and I was still gaped from being fucked so hard a few minutes before. The feeling was discomfort. It was like all my internal organs were having to rearrange themselves to make room for his cock.

After a couple of minutes passed and I still hadn't moved he asked, "Are you ok? We don't have to do this."

I nodded. "I want to. I'm just trying to..." I rocked up on my knees a little bit and back down, just testing. His body tensed. I could see the muscles ripple under the skin in his abdomen. We had never had sex face to face before and I loved seeing his reactions. The desire to make him writhe outweighed any discomfort that I was feeling. I rocked up again, higher that time. His eyes rolled back in his head again and his fingertips dug into my hips. I grinned and spread my knees out a little more. The shift in position lessened the odd pressure inside me a little. I spread my hands out on his chest for balance and slid as far up his long shaft as I could. I waited for a second until he locked gazes with me. "Ready?" I asked.

"Fuck yes," he replied.

I let gravity control my fall and we both shouted in pleasure.

Nothing in my history could have prepared me for the ecstasy that was riding Eric's cock. I controlled the speed and the angle and it was pure heaven. I couldn't last. Eric couldn't seem to decide what he wanted to watch more and his focus never settled. When he took ahold of my dick I couldn't figure out which I wanted more, to fuck his fist or to fuck my ass on his cock. I didn't have long to worry about it. My orgasm slammed though me and covered his hand and torso with thick ribbons of my cum before I collapsed on his chest. He wasn't done with me. He rolled us so that he was on top and pounded my ass ferociously. I writhed under him, floating in paradise.

"Oh shit," he breathed. He tried to slow down but his hips fell out of rhythm and he sped back up, racing toward his finish. "Fuck!" he shouted. His cock swelled and pulsed inside me and he filled my guts with his seed a second time.

As soon as he stopped thrusting through his orgasm I let my legs slide down his hips and thighs. He stayed inside me, bracing his upper body on his elbows on either side of my chest. His head was down, face buried in my neck. I could feel his rapid breaths on my neck as he panted. He regained control of his breathing and raised his head, capturing my lips in a passion filled kiss.

"I'm sorry," he murmured against my lips. "That was fast."

"That was perfect," I sighed in pleasure.

He raised his head so he could look into my eyes. I smiled and he smiled back. He kissed me again and slowly pulled out of me. My channel mourned the loss of connection. He snuggled his body next to me and pulled me against him, tucking me into his embrace, back to front, again. "I didn't know that we could do it like that."

"Like what?" I mumbled, drifting into a contented la-la land.

"Missionary."

"Did you like it?" I mumbled, almost inaudibly.

"Too much," he replied, seeming far away. "I love being able to see your beautiful face."

If there was any more conversation I wasn't aware of it. I was already asleep.

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dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

Future Readers I agree with all the positive comments and critiques below, but hear me: pay attention to the sore throat. This is the 80's. Happy to be wrong but I think Rain is in seroconversion. The Virus is taking hold. Happy, so happy, to be wrong but Rain mentioned strep. So many of my friends thought it was strep...

canndcanndalmost 9 years ago

I agree you've developed Eric some. I'd like to know more about his art. Will his muse return or has it already? Clearly his must leaving coincided with his favorite prostitute going MIA. But, will the change in their relationship affect his art? I'm anxious to see.

I thought it so interesting that this seemingly very sexual guy would be so ignorant about gay sex. Esp. since he'd been with Eric for a year. But, I guess b/c he was paying Eric followed his lead so it was pretty much one way. I like that it evens out the relationship a touch to have Rain be in control of teaching him the ropes....well at least till the real ropes come out ;)

I'm interested in whether Eric will eventually get curious enough to try to bottom. he's a very dominant guy obviously, but at times he lets his guard down with Rain and he has feelings for him, so I wonder. I think that'd be a bit further down the line though. I really liked that Eric wants to help him move his life forward and help him work out his paperwork issues and ecourage him to get his GED and stuff. Will Rain move in? Will he let Eric support him? That has to come to a head b/c his savings won't last too long and clearly Eric is not going to let him go back out to turn tricks.

Good story. I really like it so far.

BastaBastaalmost 9 years ago
I like your style!

You are quite a good storyteller. Granted, I skimmed the first two paragraphs of Part 1 but the story definitely got a hold of me thereafter. The characters have personality, even the cameos. Now I am very much invested in the story of Rain and Eric. Love it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

You've definitely humanized and developed Eric. I thought he was an ass, now you've shown him to be simply ignorant about what to do. It will be interesting to watch Eric's efforts to turn Rain into a real boy. Wondering if Rain will push back.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
The love is there

First of all, thanks much for the daily posts! I get the impression you read our comments but have the story completed by the time it is posted. And, rightly so. Rain and Eric are perfect for each other. I was this age in the 80's too. They are just figuring it all out... Kinks, gay, goth. What shines thru is Eric's love and Rain learning he is worthy of that love. Great chapter.

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