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"It is a little crowed back there with all of those bags," Raven replied with a little joking smile on her face.
The rest of the drive over to my parent's place was not as eventful. We mainly just talked lightly about nothing, and drank our coffees. Pulling into the drive way at the house I noticed that my twin sister's car was there too.
"No mentioning of what happened at the mall okay," I stated to them before putting the car in park and turning off the engine.
"What happen at the mall?" Raven asked jokingly.
"Jacob must be talking about use buying all of these clothes," Sky added.
It was my turn to roll my eyes as we all got out of the car. We made it almost to the front door when my mother opened it and pulled me in for a big hug.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 5 years agoBased on your three chapters to date . . . The two sweet cute good elves will live happy thereafter. Thanks for sharing your fairy tale with me.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoThe word is "damn' not dam. There is no such word as 'mear' - I think you mean 'mere'. People generally have 'no idea' not 'know idea'...
Rapierwit24601almost 8 years agoI hope you haven't given up on this story! While it is rife with mechanical errors, it's very imaginative.
