Raw Ch. 03

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He kissed the back of my shoulder, sweeping my braid aside so he could tease my neck with his lips and tongue. "No, darling. Just simple beds with sturdy headboards. Couples are required to bring their own props. I have my own stash for private use, but I don't keep them down there."

I tried to sit up, to look for a trunk or some other container in his room.

He pulled me back down with a chuckle. "We can play later. You need to wind down for now."

"Yes, Sir," I mumbled against his forearm. I nipped the skin and licked at the shallow teeth marks.

"Are you disappointed? Expecting something like in those 'Fifty Shades' books? Racks for suspension and whipping?"

I giggled as his fingers stroked my waist, tickling slightly. "No, I'm actually relieved you are not trying to be Christian Gray. He seems so far-fetched. I would much rather have you any day."

"Do you mean it?" Malcolm rolled me onto my back. He cupped my cheek, his thumb pressing at my lips.

I licked his thumb. "Which part?"

"Having me any day."

"Yes, I am serious. Brian—that man—may have opened my eyes to this world of kinky experiences, but you've given me so much more. He broke my trust. Made me feel like being submissive wasn't a choice."

"It should be." He leaned down and kissed me.

I moaned, wrapping my arms around his neck and he deepened the kiss. I ran my hand against the stubble on his check when we parted. "You? You've helped me believe I can trust again. I have some work to do to get it fully up and functioning, but I've got a great start now."

"Thank you. It's an honor, especially hearing that from you. Drake is a dear friend of mine, and he cares so much for you. I would do nothing to hurt you or ruin that friendship."

"I don't want to rush this, and I have some hard limits like keeping my job and my own place for now. But if you'll have me, I would gladly submit to you, Master Malcolm. To let you teach me more."

He kissed me again, his fingers playing with the wet folds between my legs. "That sounds like a very enjoyable proposition, Lady Becca. I accept."

"Good. Now move a little to the right. A little deeper."

His chuckle filled my head. "Now, now, darling. It looks like our next lesson will be correcting your need to top from the bottom."

"Oh, please, let it start tomorrow," I managed to gasp as his thumb brushed my clit.

"By all means." He finally acquiesced, his fingers delving deeper. "Now be a good girl and come for me."

~ H

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DevilbobyDevilbobyabout 3 years ago

I am loving this series, my words are few as I wish to get back to the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I know I`m finding this story late...

Thank you for writing and sharing this story. I love to find well written stories among the not so well written ones on this site. I mean, there are a number of good ones but there are far more bad ones. My comment would be, if you ever do a rewrite of this story, I think you need to spend a little more time on the Brian part of the story. Malcolm is so well written, I understand how she feels about him and why she would be interested in him. But when she goes to lunch with Brian, I couldn't tell if they even ate lunch or why she would want to leave with him. I get that small gestures like stroking and trapping her hand could be a turn on but I think I need more description of how he was making her feel and maybe more debate from her about weather to leave with him or not. She's written as a sensual woman but not a slut so it makes sense to me that she would hesitant going home with him. Also, I know there are many stories about sex between relatives on this site but that is not something I personally am interested in. I think an explanation by Malcolm the first time she meet him that what he would do with her that day would be sensual but not sexual would have been helpful and in character because he is someone who communicates with her. It would also relieve the reader concern that she was going to have sex in front of her brother, lol.

GemmaGreyGemmaGreyover 8 years ago
So pleased...

with where this story is and has been heading. Can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
hey its pretentious bitch again

THANK YOU

That is all.

PhoenixwrisingPhoenixwrisingabout 9 years ago

The only part of this site I surf are the stories and I had been lurking hoping to find one that was convincing and artistic. I finally found it with this story and decided to register so there were be more views thus leading to a higher rating.

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