Real Love Pt. 03

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"See Tay, I told you she would love you."

Taylor squeezed Michael's hand smiling.

"Is that my boy?" A loud voice boomed over the living room.

"Yes, dad I'm here."

"Hi son, finally you bring her here. Hey there, I'm Peter, you must be Taylor."

"Hi nice to meet you Peter." Taylor stuck out her hand.

"Darling we don't shaken hands, we hug around here."

Taylor laughed.

"Hey Taylor girl." Stacy yelled.

"Uh hey, wait you two are related? I thought you were an only child?" Taylor asked confused.

"He is the only child. Stacy's parents, my sister and brother-in-law were killed in a tragic accident. They are cousins, but we adopted Stacy as our own so the two can grow up to be tight as ever. So we raised them as brother and sister." Barba said.

"Oh wow. I'm sorry, but that is great for the two to be raised together."

The night went by so great and Taylor felt the love all over the house.

A few months go by and Taylor hasn't had her period.

"Michael we need to talk now!"

"Babe, what is wrong?"

"I haven't had my period."

Michael went quiet and Taylor took that as a sign of he isn't happy.

"Babe, please don't play with me. Is there a chance that you can be pregnant with my baby?"

"Yes."

Michael screamed.

"What a way to start our anniversary week. Wait, we need to go to the doctor to make sure you are pregnant."

"I have three pregnancy test."

"No to the doctor now."

"Okay."

They drive to the doctor and Michael just kept talking about her being pregnant.

The smile on Michael's face was priceless and Taylor did nothing but smile.

"Hi Michael, what is up brother?"

"Hey hey bro, this is Taylor."

"Hi, nice to meet you."

"Finally, I get to meet you. I'm nick. We been friends for years."

"He has good people in his life I see."

"So wait, whoa. Michael. Is she? Really? Let's go to the back."

Nick hauled them to the back.

"Ready Taylor?"

"Yes."

Here we go.

"So here it is. Oh look I see a heartbeat."

Michael screamed loud.

"There is a baby in there?" Taylor asked.

"Yes maam. You are indeed pregant. You have an OBGYN?"

"No."

"Get one and soon. And by the way congratulations."

"Thank you so much."

Nick walked out the room.

"I love you Taylor and my new baby."

"I love you Michael."

That's part 3 everyone. Vote, leave comments...let me know how you like it.

David will be back in the next few chapters. And I promise mya and Dominique will be back. And michael meets the parents in the next chapter.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Needs a lot of editing, take some pride in what you write, slow down, learn the difference between breath and breathe. Also, quit with the ring ring ring...ding dong, it comes across childish.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
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Just a suggestion the story seems rushed. Slow it down and add more detail like background, setting. Color ect. There are also free editors.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good writing

You someone to edit but u did a good job keep writing u will get better

Keep up the good work

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsalmost 8 years ago
sloppier than the last

Do you care at all how sloppy you write?

Even the dialogue isn't as good as the first and second part.

Sad that a promising new writer stops caring so quickly.

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