- Loving Wives
- Realization
- Page 3
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Click hereIt's funny that the bad experiences of high school jealousy and an unintentionally public sex act shaped my desires and fantasies so thoroughly. It took a long time for me to recognize my desires. And even longer to induce Lori to consider them. I had to discover her own deep wants to find the right key. But put the puzzle together correctly in a way that serves both hungers and fantasy can be realized. It wasn't logic but intuition that unlocked the door. Passion and love have kept the door open. It may be rare, it may be unconventional, but I still love it when Lori straddles my face a presses a warm wet cream pie onto my tongue. I'm still desperate to hear her say, "I've been a bad girl. Lick me clean."
- COMMENTS
BobNbobbialmost 14 years agoI can well understand the behavior here; it seems normal to me in almost every respect. A loving couple explores their sexual fantasies with a single partner and live happily ever after.
As I was reading the story and not knowing which way the author would take things, I got to wonder if possibly the wife wouldn't discover that she wanted Bill some on her own with hubby waiting at home. With author's let her fly and let her come back to me comments, that seems like a natural tack. Further sexual identity for a loving couple to explore
LorisLickeralmost 14 years agoAuthorThis was a one time through draft. Upon rereading, catching enough errors and agreeing with the comments about paragraphs. My conversion to TXT didn't seem to catch all of my original paragraph breaks. I'll polish and resubmit.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoYour Story, well maybe might be better in another classification, but in any event a couple of things slowed my reading down very much.
Paragraph Length. They appear all too long. May I suggest you vary paragraph length to between Three and say a maximum of Ten text lines?
Quotations. The Quotations in your tale were dotted randomly through paragraphs, at the beginning, end, middle. In conjunction with adjusting your paragraph lengths, a quote, if it is important or crucial to the tale, ( can be a paragraph by itself. Some were, but the overall paragraph length .; too big.
Cheers, and thanks for an interesting (to say the least) tale.
Kilroy
