She came first, with me filling her with another load of myself just after. As we lay in a pheromone covered cloud, she said, "You know you're never rid of me now, don't you?"
"Don't want to be...ever. Does that mean you'll marry me?" I asked.
"If you can find a way to be fucking me like this and present me with a ring, in a romantic way, then yes, I'll marry you. Emphasis on fucking. Okay, maybe I'm horny right now. Emphasis on romantic is better. But don't forget fucking. Absolutely do not forget fucking. Oh, jeez, I'm such a slut."
"No, you're just in love," I replied. I pushed into her one last time with my fading erection and she moaned, "Yes, in love..." she whispered.
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Great Finish
This was the perfect conclusion to Michael and Carrie's story. You wrote well
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