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"I will remember you, Mark!" Amanda said, her eyes looking into his. She held out her hand, which he briefly took as her horse trotted past him.
"So will I, Amanda. So will I."
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Author's note: This is a touch-up of a previous submission, and obviously the first chapter of a (possibly, hopefully) long series. Comments welcome :)
- COMMENTS
ResidentWeavilalmost 12 years agoI really enjoyed the characters and dialog. The plot is intriguing and the erotic zmoments seem natural and unforced. Often, stories either end up a long set of sex scenes or those scenes become mechanical and trite. You avoided both. Well done!
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoOMG, this story needs to keep going. It has so much room to grow. Please don't stop.
WerewolfatNightabout 16 years agoThis is REAL writing- not just stroke material- not that I have any problem with stroke material, mind you.
Keep it up- I'm adding you to my Favorites right now!
Anonymousabout 16 years agoI love it. Please make it a nice long saga. It has such a good story line with lots and lots of potential. Thank You for your talent. SR
