He gradually caught his breath, and smiled at his sister.
"So," he said, "ready for round two?"
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Well made
Nice balance of desire and warmth between two that are that close.
Good job
Well crafted I like that you wrote about a girl without nasty looking oversized tits.Could use a few more chapters.
Great writing skills! And as others have stated it is realistic. However, I do find myself wishing you would write the chapters abit longer. 3 pages maybe. I love this pairing and look forward to more.more...
Well Written
A great story, I agree with Mark having the huge cock and tits just ruins a story and I'm so glad you had the good taste not to put it into your story.
As for their age I don't think it matters my little sister is 73 and I still think she's hot not that I've ever done anything abou it.more...
Fantastic love story. I can't wait to see/read what happens next for Pam and Kyle. Lifelong everlasting love, with the potential for marriage and a baby, would be my choice. Loved it. Thank you
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