I laid her down on my bed and kissed her deeply then I moved down and kissed her collar bone. Moving down further I pulled up her sweater giving her a kiss on her tight stomach. I grabbed the elastic waist of her leggings and moved them down.
She propped herself up on her elbows to let me take them off. She was wearing a green thong I rubbed the front and found them to be very damp. I pulled them off her as well and tossed them in the corner.
Standingn up I removed my shirt (the only thing I was still wearing) and took the opportunity to admire her. Her sweater was bunched up under her breasts and her pussy was mostly trimmed except for a strip in the middle that glistened with moisture.
"I'm very happy with my lower half choice." I said with a little laugh then crawled in between her knees.
I kissed her pussy lips and then then I her hooded clit, I then licked along her entire groove electing a moan from her.
Spreading her open with my fingers and began to lick in earnest.
"Oh god yes" she said her thighs clamping on my head and her juices running down my chin. "Oh I want your cock in me RIGHT NOW!" she demanded.
I got up to my knees and gave myself a couple of tugs she looked at what I was doing and grabbed me guiding it towards her pussy. She rubbed the little strip of fur on the bottom of my cock.
She pointed my dick into her opening and I pressed down. Feeling some resistance I pushed harder and it slid in part way.
"Oh fuck that's good" I said I just kept pushing with constant pressure her box was so tight and warm once I was balls deep I just stayed there savoring the feeling for a bit.
"This feels so fantastic" I said and she smiled up at me.
I leaned in and kissed her. Then I leaned back and felt her hands on my ass cheeks. I slid my dick out and back in keeping a steady pace. Feeling her tunnel walls contract and myself on the verge I buried myself as deep as I could and her hands squeezed my ass hard, as I felt my cock explode in her pussy.
Completely spent and satisfied I rolled off to her side and said to her. "That was euphoric"
"It was really intense wasn't it? But I better go now before Tim starts to worry."
With that I watched her dress and she leaned in gave me a quick kiss and ran out the door. I drifted off to sleep wondering what was to come next.
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awesome story.Keep Writing.
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A good first effort. Don't sweat the negative assholes- the LW site seems to specialize in them. The story is pretty straightforward, and I appreciate that you didn't have them fall into bed straight away. The text from her husband implies that he might know what his wife gets up to. Now, how to improve: you don't punctuate nearly enough, so some of the reading has to be parsed out a bit. I tend to overpunctuate, then I go back and remove some. The rule of thumb is: if you read a sentence and take a pause at a certain point, THAT'S usually where you need a comma. Keep up the good work, and take my comments with a grain of salt because I haven't contributed a story yet and you're a braver soul than I!more...
Nice first story
Ignore the negativity in some of these comments.
I thought it was a really good first story. I am a fan of the first person perspective, and I think it is harder to write a story that way, so kudos for taking it on.
Your pacing was spot on, and your dialogue created a nice tension between the two characters.
Please keep writing and posting. Remember that for every negative comment there are at least 20 people who enjoyed it and didn't bother responding. You need a thick skin to ignore the idiots who feel compelled to be the moral police for fictional characters.
I hope to see more from you.more...
@Anonymous Re: Cuckold (The 1st one)
Hey if you don't like my writing, fine everyone's entitled to their own opinion.
Where do you see that I didn't know where the story is going? It was all too obvious!
As the prior comment says, how can it be "well-written" without readable punctuation.
What do my morals have to do with anything? I don't believe I passed any moral judgement on this.
Out of the 25 comments that weren't by me SEVEN criticized the grammar and punctuation. That's more than 25% of the comments! Who knows how many readers just gave up in frustration!
Thanks to the prior comment for the defense.more...
@anonymous cuckold
Speak for yourself. Whom, exactly, is "We?" That is, the "we" who do not care about action, punctuation or spelling? You should stick to speaking for yourself, not in the royal plural. Why does "entertainment" have to be badly spelled and punctuated? Many, quite entertaining, stories are well spelled and punctuated. That's because the authors give a damn. Poor spelling and punctuation indicate careless writing and just "spell" distracted reading, trying to figure out what is meant by poorly written prose. You, obviously, can't spell, punctuate or construct a lucid sentence. That doesn't mean others have a room temperature IQ. "We" are interested in the morals of SBrookes103x to the same degree "we" are interested in your dull criticism: not at all.more...
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